|Reviews for Ash finds love|
| LightRayPearlshipper 4/23/13 . chapter 2
Chapter 1 and 2 are the same.
| Teddiursa3892 9/11/12 . chapter 2
Why is chapter 2 exactly the same as chapter 1?
| Pete the Rock 4/9/12 . chapter 1
So-so start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. Plus, could you break up your paragraphs more? When you compact many people speaking, you confuse the readers a lot. Try reading one of my stories to understand what I mean.
| shaymin fever 3 4/9/12 . chapter 2
bluenette haha idk y but that allways makes me laugh /...