Chapter 1 and 2 are the same.

Why is chapter 2 exactly the same as chapter 1?

So-so start, but are you including Digimon? There is a Pokemon only section in the Games category, if you weren't aware. Plus, could you break up your paragraphs more? When you compact many people speaking, you confuse the readers a lot. Try reading one of my stories to understand what I mean.

bluenette haha idk y but that allways makes me laugh /...