The stort was ... Okay bit about the movie its is BASED on the the book it isnt the book itself if you think a movie is going to be the book u will ALWAYS be dissapointed.

I'm...impressed.

it was short but really nice! thank you!

It would be cool if you could do a two-shot, since it's rather dark. Like how he felt when she showed up, coming to his aid. That would be so cool! Loved this little one-shot though. The way you described him not being needed by anyone...awtch, I can really feel the pain.