I think that robin should have thoughts about sex with Mariah an he can't get it out of his mind an Mariah thinks he's mad at her when he try's to stay away from her thinking something wrong might happen.

It was great dont worry :)

OMG u make me wish my boyfriend would be like Robbin ! I love your righting :D

Love it !

I love the story's !

I LOVE THIS STORRY SO MUCH!IT's AWSOMEE BUT I THINK U SHOULDNT GOT EM MARIED SO SOON MAYBE IF YOU MADE AN SEQUEL WITH MORE ADVENTURES AND MORE UP AND DOWNS IN THERE LOVE AND AT THE END OF THAT SEQUEL GET THEM ANYWAY I LOVED IT

I love your story, I think you should try to have Robin and Maria mad at each other more for Robin's mistakes. It builds tension.

secret doors and private lockers you had it mixed up.

thank you i hated him ugh!

awesome btw i read cured it is good

it doesn't suck it great

OH MY GOSH I FINISHED THIS AND IT WAS SO AMAZING! I wish there was ANOTHER MOVIE BASED OFF OF IT! With the EXACT same characters from the first one! Oh wow the passion,the fighting,the promises,THE ADVENTURE! Thankyou so much for this wonderful story. I guess since i'm done with this fanfiction. i can find another one based on the movie or book. (lol) But this by far is the best. Also I love the way you write(:

amazing!

I'm putting my full story review at the very end - not just for the epilogue. LOVED THIS. It was pretty well written, and I couldn't stop reading! Sometimes I though that there was confusion of centuries - like the purity ring (which did not exist then, since they assumed their daughters would be pure until marriage), going to Hawaii, a honeymoon, saying things like "freak out" and "baby", but overall, I lied it a lot!

Wohooo! I HATE Emmett!