Wow. So sad and wonderful, yet so perfectly IC. You have absolutely captured the insane Master, and Jack's reactions are totally perfect. This is canon. The end, and I love you for this. Please, do write more of these.

Okay, yeah, I cried. Maybe a lot... But I was smiling at the end. As soon as the Master said he'd pop over and visit Rose, I started smiling. That's where he went wrong. The Doctor would never stand for that.

This is now officially canon in my mind, by the way. This completely happened, and nothing anyone says will make me think otherwise!

awesome :)

Perfection! You captured the Master wonderfully here along with The Doctor and Jack too! I could honestly see The Doctor writing something like that for Rose. And Of course the Master had no idea what mentioning Rose's name would do! It always brings him strength!

This was great. Your grasp of the Master's voice was awesome, and i particularly liked the last bit.

oohhh now that was good :) if only it was in the actual episode

Oh my God. Words cannot describe how much I love this!

I love the epitaph - it's lovely, but the Doctor's scatterbrained style shines through just enough.

Your Master is EXCELLENT. Every single aspect of his personality makes decent humans (/sentient beings) want to at least punch him in the face, which you've displayed perfectly. I hope there's more to come.

Oooohhh...That was good. Perfectly in character.

That was so sad and beautiful, I can easily imagine it as part of canon, well except the beloved word.