Reviews for Win Me Over
Team Major Whitlock 1/18/13 . chapter 1
I love this story so far, please update soon and have a Tanya's POV of the meeting oh and have her reconize (sp?) that her and Bella are mates straight away because it'll be better that way and have Edward just want to be around Bella because of her sweet smelling blood but he has it in his head that they're mates plus now she's got a daughter which makes him want her more since vampires can't have children. I hope you like my surjestions (sp?) and please update ASAP x
jupitersthunder 6/28/12 . chapter 1
This is an interesting first chapter. A bit confusing with the wordings but good. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
LisaLisa3232 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Hopefully you will continue
Okami Pup 5/28/12 . chapter 1
freaking awesome story so far. please update soon
anon 5/18/12 . chapter 1
the prologue was great so that means that the chapters are gunna be way better :p hope you update soon!
TheYearIs2013 5/13/12 . chapter 1
The prologue is well written. Hope you plan on continuing this story.
anon 5/10/12 . chapter 1
please updaaatteee soon im really interested in this story and cant wait for the next chapter :)
SnowboardingQueen 5/9/12 . chapter 1
you do plan on updating right?this is a story i wouldnt mind stalking:)not as creepy as it sounds
Leah p 4/20/12 . chapter 1
I'm really looking forward to the first chapter. So get cracking on it :p Please?
dhisasian 4/12/12 . chapter 1
prologue was great. I can't wait for more chapters to come. Update soon.
vamp1001 4/10/12 . chapter 1
Love it it will be an interesting story to write and continue it
MusicLover333 4/10/12 . chapter 1
Intriguing intro, definetely looks like it will be a great one. :)