have you ever thought of continuing this? I would love to read more

Loved it, jane at susan's mercy:) plz update some follow up!

Gosh, this was intense! Please continue this one! This has sooooo much potential. I always hated that bitch on the show and I would hope you'd make her pay for this in the end - can't imagine what mamma-bear Lisbon will do to her when she finds out! I'm sure it wouldn't be pretty for Darcy!
So, please don't leave it at that - it's rather cruel to leave the poor guy in that kind of hopeless situation!
Anyway, thanks for sharing this with us!

Glad I stumbled upon this little gem. It was VERY well written, and such an interesting idea! Your attention to detail (particularly of Jane's body) was amazing, really put me in the moment. Love Jane's last line too, lol. That would be very Jane in that situation.

I would love for you to continue this. Him trying to keep this arrangement from Lisbon. Her finding out eventually. Jane feeling angery, guilty, used. Lots of potential for a long fic here. I'm desperate for some good, original fics-there's been a dearth of them of late.

I'm putting this on story alert, just to be optimistic.

Creepy, very creepy...

OMG - poor Jane! Are you continuing this? I have no doubt in my mind that Jane made the decision he did to protect Lisbon. No doubt at all. And despite what some people believe, males can be raped and this is a perfect example of that. If someone threatened to kill another, it wouldn't count as consensual sex, and for Jane - Lisbon is so precious to him - the threat is almost as bad! Very interested in a follow up. Especially if Lisbon starts to suspect that Jane is being hurt in some way, as Lisbon herself is very protective AND perceptive. It would also be an interesting case study to see how Jane deals with the after effects. Please continue!

ummm, is it wrong that I both loved this and want a follow up with a pissed and jealous red john. I mean seriously, he can't have anyone else torturing Jane. thanks!

Totally unexpected but rather brilliant! Often when I read fan fiction, I wish that those story lines would play out on TV. This definitely isn't one of those plots but I love this piece because it's so warped. I will never look at Agent Darcy on screen in the same way again, thanks to you I'll always imagine she's really kinda sick and crazy :)

You have such a creative imagination! While I certainly dabble in "what ifs" with this show, I never even thought of this possibility. Kudos to you for pairing up these two, however disturbing it may be! You certainly could continue this storyline in the future...

Good luck with the end-of-year stuff. Know that your loyal readers will be eagerly awaiting the end of your paperwork misery (and therefore the return of our fan fiction delight!) as much as you are! And thanks for the heads-up on the hold status of Wicked Things. Now that I know not to expect anything on it for a little while, I won't be desperately checking for it everyday. That is, until April is over. ;)

'it is tax-time, readers, and I am up to my biceps in paperwork this month. So while I am forced to deal with both my hubby's and my own business's year-end (and therefore Wicked Things chapter 3 is on a short hold until April's end),'

That was sad news but good luck with the taxes I don't envy you. Will be holding my breath for the chapter 3 - thinking again perhaps I had better not or I will never get to read it! :)

Julie xxx

Lol, poor Jane. Lets hope he never gets to the stage where he misses Darcy.

Are you going to contine with this storyline as it has the potential to be a multi-chaptered fic. Would love to see what would happen if Jane couldn't bear Darcy's appetites/attention and he eventually goes to Lisbon for help, what would they do to finally rid themselves of this women.

Any chance that you would consider continueing it?