Love it!! One of the best i've ever read!

really love this chapter always make my eyes watery. Ja ne

This is one of the best stories I've read and by far one of my favorites. It has a good plot, well developed characters, and over all a good storyline. It is very well written. Keep up the good work. It's been a few years but I hope to read more of your work.

aww... so sweet! love the whole story! thanks loads! took me three days to finish reading it, but it's all worth it!

Great story :) hope to read more from you and LOVE LOVE LOVE the mention of Barbados (my home!!) in the story :)

I want to thank you for writing such a great story. It has been over 2 years since I found such an amazing Sailor Moon fanfic like this. Your story is a jewel and I hope you keep on writing!

Hey! I have to say I am extremely excited to have found you in . I first read your stories in Aria's Ink and I was was so dissapointed that your account was disabled. I left a few reviews on Aria's, but I would like to say that this Fic is by far my favorite fic. Including the ones i've read since the days. Again I would like to commend you for being such a talented writer!

Hey. Just found your story and am saving it for later x)

I'm sure this has already been said, but the "orange" thing...

It depends on what part of the US you're from. I grew up near DC and say o-range, like you described.

My mom says "ornge" like it's one syllable, and she's from Western NY.

My dad says "Ah-range" and he's from Deleware.

No offense taken at all, I love this story and I'm actually re-reading it for a second time. I had to find the story on and favorite it since I originally read it on aria's ink.

Much

i love ur story it's one of my favs!!

awesome Serena's from Toronto!! lol

I loved it. You get some mad props for finishing such a long story. I was pleasantly surprised at the length of this piece. Thank you! I stayed up until about 3:30 am on the night before a test to finish this; it was so good that I couldn't just walk away. The only thing that I thought was a little off was the radical personality shift of Candace before and after the birth of Izabella; however, Serena's past, her mother's death, her relationship with her family and friends were all so realistic and dead on that it made up for it. I could literally see how she and everyone else grew as characters. You have a great talent! I especially liked the end with Izabella's dream - that cracked me up - Daddy's little girl didn't think he was dashing as Tux. Hehe. You didn't entirely leave the SM plot line! I'm going to go check out your other stories now!

I don't know if u could receive my notes! The story I've just read is so good! Swear to God, it made me cry out! Can u believe it, a 23-year-old girl, read a fanfic, and cry over the story! I've never had this emotion about a fic before (4 years experience reading fanfiction!). Thanks for the story!

This was a really well written story. Usually I hate stories with stuff like abuse in them (completely nasty), but your story was very well written and very human. Well done really.

I also loved the humour in it. "looking so innocent it would make a serial killer proud" - I just cracked up. Same with the 'cheap' comment from Walter about the date. Wonderful :)

Cheers

I absolutely love this story!! I could not stop reading at all, I finished the whole story in one day!! You did a great job.


-Tiff