This was freaken cool.

This is very...disturbing

I like Arys works quite much and saw in a comment that you write, so it got me curious. "smile"

The story gave me shivers. This is exact the ending I would prefer for the whole Alice story. The evil wins!

I love how you play with Alice sanity, her doubts and her trys to assure herself, that this world is the right one.

The love scene was very explicit, but yet beautifully written. I draw a very good picture of those two, the posessiveness (is there such a word?) of the doctor and Alice almost fanatic affection for him.

And the broken Wonderland, yes. Poor Alice, captured by the Dollmaker. I think it is a perfect motive for a picture.

So, what can I say? I enjoyed reading the story very much, so keep up the good work!

Emiress

Ah.. that was really good! Is it going to be continued? I do very well hope so! I think the story has a lot of potential and it is nice to read stories where the pairing has already been established. Oh I do feel quite bad for poor Alice because she cannot remember D: I think using actual quotes is really clever and I have attempted that in my own story as well :D makes it more realistic yeh?

Keep up the good work! This must force Ary to draw more porn!

Hahah... however do you think that Alice would call Bumby, doctor forever? I don't know D:

Your fics are still disturbing as ever... AWESOME! CREEPY, BUT ALWAYS IN A GOOD WAY! But still... *shudders*...Bumby, yuck!