A well written and executed piece. Neatly encapsulates all the feelings and emotions the characters would have been feeling.

Nice work on this.

This was cleverly well written. Vakarian and Williams are both very much in character here, from the tense unease held on Ash's shoulders to Garrus' playful sense of humor. There's so much more to Ashley's personality and I was pleasantly surprised to see a story that pulled it off so well. Great job, fabulous read. :)

I love the Ashley-Garrus dynamic. It really is a great pair that dosen't get half the attention it deserves. Thanks for giving us a really good look at it.

Wonderful, realistic story that captured the essence of the relationship between Garrus and Ashley, and the personality and character of both.