Have it so that vader kills deathstrem in the middle of the meeting with clestisa for attacking cloudsdale.

Work faster. This is really good, and i want more of it

Its pretty good. What you could say was that this was inbetween the last two episodes of star wars, giving an alternate/your own explanation on more reasons that vader turned good again. I know life may get in the way or it is just to hard but could you make the chapters a little longer possibly? Its your choice im just expressing my opinion. Keep up the good work.

This is a fun story! I hope you update pretty soon.

You don't know how excited I am right now. I get this feeling when badass characters are being transported in the universe of MLP (like Vader or Broly)...I just hope I will be able to sleep now...

Anyway, great work, simply love it.
When the next chapter?

Still, take your time, I don't want you to rush it.

MOAR NOW!

I think that when Darth Vader meets princess celestia it should be a surprise visit; think about it if celestia can pull small pranks on Mr/Mrs. Cake she'd be willing to take a time to go to the ponyville library so she could Talk like a normal pony with friends. Or vader could just use the force to synchronize with Equestria so he could tell when the time is to go to Canterlot. Either make sure Vader doesn't kill off anypony. Discord would be o.k, Princess Luna is not o.k. because of nightmare moon.

P.S. I have an oc you can use his name is night-blade ( he is a black pegasi with white mane and tail with silver eyes.)

night-blade

I'll wait excited whats goining to happen next... This is so great atory this far...

"This strange being known as Lord Vader has been heard about before but I can't remember the last time it was."

Something tells me when she sees him, she's gonna go "Sun God" on his ass.

""I will be the one that is in charge here not you" Lord Vader said as he released his grip on Bow."

I think it would be better if he said "I will be in charge now Commander Bow, you will wait for your turn"

"Captain Deathstrum was absolutely shocked by this, since Lord Vader was gone he wasn't sure if he should be relieved by this or terrified out of his mind."

I'm pretty sure any imperial captain would be relieved that Vader's gone.

""Where are we?" one trooper asked.

"Not sure, looks like Naboo was combined with Dagobah if you think about it" another trooper joked."

Boy wait untill they see the rest of it.

""Looks like some kind of dragon but its small" another trooper replied.

"Maybe it's a baby dragon?" a trooper to his right asked."

Umm...how does he know?

A day after "Bridle Gossip"? Wouldn't that mean they're in "Swarm of the Century" now?

I don't blame Fluttershy being nervous in this scene because if I heard about some strange and (could be) dangerous creatures in the forest then I would be nervous.

"Oh no somepony is hurt out here, come on Spike we need to see what it is!"

Don't you mean "come on Spike, we need to see what is going on!"?

Didn't they already take Polis Massa (Star Wars Battlefront 2) unless this is before they found the decoy stolen plans?

You definately got the ship right, there was no Imperial Class II Star Destroyers until way later on.

You got the amount of fighters, bombers and transports correct (have you been using Wookiepedia to get the info, not to say it isn't correct I'm just saying).

I think you need to rework this part because if it's in the style of Star Wars Episode IV then why is the last two sentences on one liners.

First of all I like to say that this is an interesting idea, I don't think anypony has done this type of crossover before (That other one doesn't count if you know what I'm talking about).

I see you took advice from some of your reviewers and revised chapters 4-6 again, good thing because I was a little confused when Fluttershy was stuttering (I know she's a shy pony but I don't recall her stuttering her sentences all the time).

The Emperor's last line is much better (saying him is more simple than himself plus it feels shorter).

And thank the force, celestia, etc about specifying when the "Justice" arrived, I was a little confused about when the hell it was.

Quite a unique story you got going here, I do like the idea that Vader is changing the longer he stays in Equestria and you seem to do a good job with that (after revising it of course)

The only things you need to change are Tylon (Bow was the commander after Darth Vader), Fluttershy (She isn't Stuttershy for gods sake, loosen her up) and specify when the "Justice" is (I was confused when the hell were they?).