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so wens chap4 coming our

Hey Nice Story Really Nice Please Post More P.S I've Played All The Epic Battle Fantasy Games And Never Heard Of Anna. P.S.S No Offense. P.S.S.S Don't Beg If Pepole Don't Wanna Read That's Their Loss Because Miss Out On Really Really REALLY Good Battle4Eva

AWESOME i am begging you please make more!

It's pretty normal for authors to suffer from a lack of ideas and inpirations, but you must not force anything out or the story will feel unatural.

Usually, what I do is, I take a small note book where ever I go, since ideas may come from the most random things you are doing or in the most random places you are in. You could be taking a 'potty break' when you suddenly have this really awesome idea for the story. Write it down in your notes immediately, before they are forgottern.

Also, before extending the story further, you may want to stack up on your ideas first- make sure you have at lease enough ideas to keep the story going at a steady pace- if you haven't already have all of the ideas for the story already, then, you start to extend your ideas, and put them into the story as a test, even if the idea doesn't work out, you'll still have a lot of other ideas to back your story up.

But all in all, good job so far! _ I hope you'll think of something soon!

You accept anon reviews! YOSH!

Anyway, this is great! I especially like how you've incorporated Anna in, considering the fact that we know zilch about her apart from her appearance, basic clothes, weapons and tendency towards those retarded bush things. XD And finally, a canon pairing for Lance! (insert epic voice here) I shall call it- LANNA!

(Still in epic voice) Aaron out!

I like your story! I'm gonna add this to my alerts. And in the first chapter where you said Lance was extra nice to Anna was just so frickin' cute! Or atleast that's what I think _

Oh wow, looks like we have an epic story going on here.

I liked the way you indroduced the plot and all. All of the characters were in character (I do not know about Anna because she is not yet in the game and I do not know her personality). Good job!

I think you deserve a cookie for writing in first person, because I know how hard it is to try to act and think like the character in the story, you did a great job disbribing Natalie's thoughts and personalities, though, keep it up!

-Jade the X9ian _