|Reviews for Heaven for the Fallen|
| TinaWhacksFrostWithMuffin 5/28/13 . chapter 1
Hey, this is actually really interesting. I really look forward to reading the other chapters -
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 16
Awwwww nooooo, I had so much fun and enlightment reading this fic, and to learn that it's not going to be updated in a while is sad. Can you please please pretty please update it sooner, for me? (lol, that doesn't really work does it, since you don't know me in real life and I probably mean very little to you)
But anyway, I really liked this chapter, and I like how there's implications on this vacation being an annual thing, I can't wait to read about their next vacation next year!
Also, hmm...the challenge, I might do it. Key word: might.
Can I PM it to you if I decide I'm going to do it?
P.S. May the best of luck go towards you and your book.
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 15
xD So cute, but I bet Glimmer knows that already!
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 14
Lol, this chapter was fabulous. I honestly can't wait to read the vacation chapters, though maybe Connie is a little lonely just being by herself. (since there's noone else her age)
Can you make one of Rue's siblings (I think she had five in the books) die of starvation or the rebellion and arrive here so she could be with Connie?
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 13
No don't be, this chapter was brilliant, and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Keep up the good work, and I can't wait to read about their vacation. I don't have any ideas or suggestions in mind though. (And it's probably no use since the first two parts of the vacation has already been written, which means the place must be already picked).
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 12
Yay! Primrose finally arrived, and I like her arrival, and her initial fears about the careers. The paragraph where's she's debating with herself about what to do is funny and amusing, and I laughed at that. I also think the usage of short sentences in that paragraph was a great way to built tension in this story!
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 11
Oooh, can't wait for a district 2 chapter. Perhaps all of the characters in this story will go to each of their districts!
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 10
I really liked this chapter, once again the description was excellent, and the mood was captured very well, and I liked the halloween theme in this!
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 9
Oooh I see you've adopted the actress'/actor's last names as the characters last names in this one, it's a common thing used by lots of fanfic authors, though I don't personally like it, I can't really blame the story for that because it's more of a taste thing, instead of a technique thing.
I quite liked this chapter, and the direction Clove and Marvel's relationship is going, and I can also see some Zoe/Thresh relationship too!
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 8
Ahhh, the joys of IKEA.
Yes I can emphasize with that, I've been to IKEA too and I like it there :3 It's realllly big though. (and somewhat easy to get lost)
I also like this chapter, Rue and Connie's enthusiasm, and I laughed a little to myself at the line 'we want frozen yogurt, we want swedish meatballs, we want...' it never ends...'
I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 7
Wow, I really liked this chapter, and all the description involved! Heaven seems extremely nice :))
I also like the little spot of characterization on Zoe. (Foxface)
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 6
Aww, I loved this chapter, the argument Clove had with Zac was pretty funny, and I guess that's what he meant in the first chapter when he told Glimmer that some people were loud and interruptive, and yet i liked the Glimmer/Cato interaction. Keep it up!
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 5
Lol, Connie seems really energetic in this chapter, and the information about Clove's cooking skills is unexpected, but it's not the first time I've seen an author give her that particular skill, and the fact that she didn't want anyone to know balanced it out!
I can barely wait to read the next chapter :) !
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 4
Wow, I really liked this chapter. It wasn't as long as the other ones, but it was short and brief and the description and emotion within this chapter was good, and when I read the words 'Primrose Everdeen' my heart did a small leap, literally.
I like how you connected this to the HG books, and I also like Rue's house, it's very fitting :))
And I can see some Carvel/Mlove, whatever the term is coming up! Usually that's not one of my popular pairings but if it's written well, like all pairings I wouldn't mind. (but something tells me it would be)
| XxTigerLilyxX 5/28/13 . chapter 3
Yay, I see implications of Glato, one of my favourite pairings :) Can't wait to read more, and I like how this chapter introduced Connie, you did a good job of writing someone else's character, and she seems adorable!