:D

Hey
Really like your story plea go on with it

sequel!

Love it. Pleas make a sequel

Your writing styles pretty good but when so much is unoriginal it tends to be less than interesting, you needed to vere off the original work faster and develop your own story, not just the very end...although I do think that if this was a revelation in the series it would have been quite cool yet cliched and no where near as good as the proper outcome.

that was amazing ifelt as if i was right there you are an amazing writer

This is the best Agron and Nasir story I have ever read! :) Do an another story with them! I'd love to them them too :)

omg! omg!

cant wait until the next chapter..

While you have a good story, you don't know how to properly punctuate dialog. You have to have some sort of punctuation inside your quotes.

"Please, give him back to me," Agron whispered, pleading to thin air. "Give him back to me."

All I added was a comma but it is necessary to the sentence.

I adore your writing! I'm so happy to finally read a good Nasir and Agron fanfiction! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Still, if you leave the story like this and don't write more soon... I will find you...

Hey! And Thanks... I think you wrote a great story.
The idea of Azur beeing Nasirs brother is perfect :) I read yor story, before I saw the last episode of season3 and I really waited for this secret to be idea was better tan the orginal !
I plead for more chapters!

Ugh! I wanted Nasir to say it back!

Poor Nasir one of the stages of grief :'(

That was just too depressing. At least the two brothers had a little moment before he died. Geez now I'm sad thanks :p