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Izzi89 2/18/13 . chapter 1Because of your great stories, i too find myself tending to write Engie-Snippy stories XD I think my favorite part was when Snippy was assaulting Engie :P Though this story contradicts with what Snippy says in issue 90 about Engie not saying a word to him, I still enjoyed reading this very much :D |
The Joker's Ears and Eyes 10/15/12 . chapter 1like it! :) well written. |
GelibeanH20 10/12/12 . chapter 1This is awesome! I would love to see more from you! :D |
Silvermoon of Forestclan 6/4/12 . chapter 1Well, I don't think the second revelation's going to go down so well... I liked your story! -Silvermoon |
temarcia 4/15/12 . chapter 1That was a great fanfiction. I like, when you write about Engie. You seem to understand him so well. But, the rest of the crowd were also in-character. I think, Engie did not know Pilot personally - he wasn't a serviceman. Everything you have shown here, seemed to be probable. ; ) I love reading your stories! Keep them coming! : D |
eight 0f hearts 4/13/12 . chapter 1This is perfection. Seriously, your writing is perfect. I can't really think of anything else to say, because, honestly, I can't find a single flaw in this. The characterisation is spot on, and your writing style is amazing, and I can just picture everything happening. NEVER STOP WRITING- *brick'd* |