Reviews for If I Walk Away
xfmoon 4/17/12 . chapter 1
Fantastic tag! I would have loved to see something like this on the show. As others have said the last line was great. Kudos to you :)
The Flaming Dragonfly 4/15/12 . chapter 1
This is very nice. Anything longer probably wouldn't have worked as well. And I love the last line.
liten-sam 4/14/12 . chapter 1
This was lovely, thanks for writing it
Wldwmn 4/14/12 . chapter 1
Truly excellent vignette. For a short piece the writing was very descriptive and definitely 'put me in' the scene. Subtle emotional content and very IC for both Jane and Lisbon. Well done! :)
Lothiriel84 4/14/12 . chapter 1
I simply loved this tag - every part of it!

I'm actually going to nominate it for the Paint It Red Awards (on the Paint It Red forum), I hope you don't mind...

Thanks for writing it!
nic73 4/13/12 . chapter 1
A great job, authors have done a really good job with that 5 second moment.
jisbon fan 4/13/12 . chapter 1
i am absolutely in love with this. it would have been fabulous to have seen this on air.
TZEJForever 4/13/12 . chapter 1
I would have loved to see job. Loved it!
Donnamour1969 4/13/12 . chapter 1
That last line made the tag. Well done.
LAurore 4/13/12 . chapter 1
Nice done :)

Just, I think the end is a little too abrupt...