Aw, that was such a sweet and happy story. I liked the whole meeting of the Marauders, and Remus fending off the bad guys. James and Sirius were great, and you wrote Peter pretty well, too. And of course Remus was lovely. Good writing throughout, liked the Hogsmeade scene and everything.

Nicely done. Very interesting. I like how you handled it.

WONDERFUL!

I LOVE IT!

Remus has friends! Friendly Friends!

WRITE ON!

yes, the story did flow. it was confusing sometimes, though. i just sometimes couldn't recognise the scene breaks, and was confused for a little bit; the actual WRITING was SO not confusing.

Besides that, this was great! very sweet remus-sirius-james-peter bonding going on here, and i absolutely LOVED all of your Remus-speak and Remus-POVs ('specially the werewolf-speech that he made. that. was. amazing.). And Sirius not liking lies and valuing trust alot was also very Sirius-ish (whaddaya expect, his animagus form IS a dog. he obviously likes loyalty-trust stuff). Ooh, and you know what else I liked? Remus thinking to himself that there should be a map. VEERY marauders-map-leading-up-to-like.

Sirius was a pureblood, though. but this was posted in 20, and i'm pretty sure we didn't learn about his family till book 5, which i'm pretty sure was published after this.

I'd LOVE a sequel! lemme go see if you wrote one! buh-bye now!

it was pretty good but can i just say

sirius is a ureblood his mum was a really dark deatheater for gods sake

his dad wouldnt even of dreamt ofmarrying a muggle woman

if youve evn seen harry potter then you should know this

by marauders-obsessed (a.k.a amy)

Wowies, I was bored, with Post-DH depression and was looking through old fics invoving Remus and this was the last one so I read it - it is so cute!

I loved it!

Really brilliant.

love the story!

good story

Now, how the heck did Pettigrew get into Gryffindor? Why do people assume that he's in that house? Gryffindor is for brave people, and there is nobody less brave in the HP series than Peter.

i was good but there were some mistakes. when Sirius said My mum’s a Muggle, my dad’s a wizard it was wrong. Sirius is from one of the oldest wiserding family ther is no way his mom was a muggle. and his little brother was a wizard who hapend to be a death eater.

well, it being an old story, I assume this review wont be read, but I will write it anyway, to hold up my honor. Being an amature fan fic writher my self, I say it was very good, but, I like Remus lyco. storys, so that could have somthing to do with it.

I loved it:)

good, a bit confusing but i got the hang of it

really cool story. go the marauders!