Now THIS was really good. Smooth writing, good emotions, and the fact that it's about Phoebus and Esmerelda. (I really hope I spelled that right...) Anyway, great job! :)

lovely :)

Aww, this is so cute! Very well written, I love it!

My friend, you did a good job on this xD

And I know, a lot of people can't type my user name right owo;;;

But I liked the style that this was written in, I just recently posted another fanfiction for these two, my mind is addicted to them like a drug. I can't stop xD

But clearly, the two are kept in character and the story was told well, definitely going into my favorites!

Well done, hope to see more from you!