I don't know what to say... I mean I liked it :D but its sad :l

love it!

it was good. dark but good

This is a good one-shot. It leaves the details up to the imagination.

Really good!

Beyond words, I am blown away and delighted.

Thank you so much for this story suited to me own sort of writing style. I liked how bitter sweet it turned out and how much of it was left up for the reader's interpretation. I think Sakura, though imprisoned within her mind and the facility, led a happy life along with Pein. When it comes down to it, all you need it love, and she has that. This made me so happy to read, thank you for this piece of work!

It's kind of ironic how Pein is the one to help her, especially since his name can be interpreted as literal pain. I imagine Pein in my head but the way you use his name in repetition during some parts makes me think of the figurative meaning of pain, so bravo! I feel like this really adds to the effects of Sakura's unstable mind.

I really like how you put Sakura's statistics in the beginning and ending, it was chilling to see that she was pronounced deranged and unable to leave the facility in the end. It's a bittersweet ending. Sad for obvious reasons, but happy because I suppose now she'll be able to stay with Pein.

Omg I was like balling by the end of this and I don't even know if they're happy tears or sad tears. Oh gosh, that story was amazing. Dark, twisted, but incredibly amazing. Great job and keep it up!

I was sad :'(

K-H

while the theme was indeed a bit dark and sombre, I adore the simple love of just being there that Pein offers Sakura. It's very touching, and the contrasting emotions make this a powerful short story. And the way you wrote it with short little scenes worked for a great effect.

Well done! :)

This story is amazing! Keep up the great work :)

Wow, this is good. . I love the angst added in, and the romance was brilliant. I also adore how you formatted this. Gosh, this is really good. :) Nicely done!

-Nic

Using my POWERS OF DEDUCTION I'm guessing Pein was actually a figment of her imagination. In her need to feel really wanted and loved she created her own perfect man who embodied everything she wanted-true love, patience, and a deep understanding of her feelings.

Honestly I love dark stories where girls end up loving their inner-psycho hallucination. It's so crazy.

Good job!

Wow, being in love is suppose to make you happy. And that Sakura's afraid of falling in love. Well, love DOES hurt, and Sakura DID fall in love. Seriously, the psychiatrist is the one that needs to learn. And poor Sakura, putting up with Sasuke and her 'friends' for so long (even though her friends tried to help her...kinda). Anyways, this story is really good. And the 'you cannot love' thing was a nice touch. So keep writing?

The ending just made me so sad. Fuck the facility. And I believe in Pein and Sakura's love.! And by the way, where did Sasuke go.?