I loved this you should keep it going :) it would make an interesting story

I likd this .Marcone is one of my favorite characters It did a good job of showing the complicated relationship Harry and gentleman Jim have.

Pretty good, although... I gotta say the pairing is rather odd, but still good. I liked it.

Love this.

There is only one word that perfectly describes this: Awesome

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Any more with John and Harry? :3

Aww. Enjoyed the fic (and felt kinda bad for Morgan). Great work.

More please, I'd like to see how long it takes Harry to get a clue!

I am indeed having fun reading! Sounds like Morgan had better steer clear of Chicago (or maybe the US) for a decade or two. He's like a demented cuckoo clock, one where the bird pops out at random intervals and screams, "Black magic! Black magic! Treason!" Nice characterization of Marcone, too, by the way.