Man. You know that a story is good when a reader gets into it, and gets bummed when there's only one chapter so far.

I hope you are still planning to work on this story. But feel free to take as much time as you need.

Interesting concept, I'll be keeping my eye out for future chapters.

This was an amazing chapter. Everyone was so in character! Update soon!

This is amazing! I can't wait to see what happens

Wow! You are very talented! Update soonn