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| YaoiIsLove 2005-02-01 ch 8, | abuseupdate asap please. an ya know by the way you write it it sounds like sango is pregant. but really good update. |
| K. Marie 313 2005-01-18 ch 3, | abusehi, it's kristin again. I love the story so far, but I have to tell you something. In teh second chapter, you might want to read what you wrote over again because I think you mix up sango and kagome talking. idk, maybe I'm just losing my mind, since I should be in bed adn it is almost midnight. Just thought you might like to know so you can change it. but really, great story so far. |
| Aki-Enjeru 2004-11-28 ch 8, | abuseplease update this is getting good! (does puppydog pout) POLEASE! |
| Sherabaroo 2004-07-22 ch 8, anon. | abusei know i reviewed a million times but i completely adore this story and i cant wait for ur next update! im a fan of your work and i hope you will continue! you havent updated in such a long time! please do! |
| Sherabaroo 2004-07-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseME AGAIN! i wanna know what happens next! update! |
| Sherabaroo 2004-07-22 ch 2, anon. | abusei absolutely love your work and i enjoy reading all your fics! please update soon! |
| Sherabaroo 2004-07-22 ch 1, anon. | abusewow, good story so far ^^ i really like the plot! |
| KaT aka Mistress Shinigami 2003-07-10 ch 8, | abuseThis story is spectacular! You haven't updated in so long...I hope you add more soon! =) I love how sweet Miroku is, since she's lost her memory...and I also love how Sango still has confusing feelings for him, even though she doesn't remember who he is. It's all so sweet! |
| Crystal Sapphire 2003-06-23 ch 8, anon. | abuseHey that was a good storie but umm the ending ruined the whole romantic part your so evil. |
| Sadistic Shadow 2003-06-17 ch 8, | abusePardon me a moment...I must...Get out of my state of total euphoria before I go on with the actual review... . . . Ok, I think I'm alright now. After reading most of your fics, I'm on a Miroku/Sango high. Yay. And in an hour I get to go watch Inu Yasha...With Miroku and Sango. Double yay. I really enjoyed this fic (well, not to say that I didn't enjoy your others- cuz' I did, and very much so at that). I was quite distressed when I found that Chapter 8 was the last installment so far...And that it hadn't been updated in quite some time. Only thing that might be remotely good about that fact is more M/S fics and the very fact that since it's been a long time there could be an update coming soon? Anyway, I didn't really find any faults with this fic. Then again, I wasn't really looking. I was too busy drooling. So you may have had a few typos or grammatical errors...Like I noticed- or even cared. Truth-be-told, I really like your present-tense style. Hrmm...Adult Swim starts in about five minutes now...So I suppose I better wrap this up. Be sure to expect reviews from me on your other stories; probably by tomorrow. Who knows, I might even decide to IM you and put you on a pedestal >}... Good luck and godspeed on future updates and works n.n! ~*Shiara Kazikal*~ Sadistic Shadow |
| Shunsoku 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseHow do you come up with this stuff?! It was wonderful! I love all your stories! |
| jordi 2003-04-01 ch 8, anon. | abuseNot surprising that I like this fic! I have not read any of your work that I have not liked! Know you are working on several different projects so won't pester you about the next chapter. One thing I have found, though, that has helped me with my writing is that after I have completed a few paragraphs, pages, or a chapter I read it allowed and try to hear it as if I have never heard of it before. It is kind of hard to imagine this -- that I am my own audience -- but it does help! I catch a lot of my errors that way. I think it would be just like IY to be a complete idiot about Sango's condition while truly worrying about her inside (with a great bit of thankfulness that it is Sango and not Kegome!) And it is nice to see Sango not pummulling poor Miroku for his lechie ways! Jordi |
| Crystal Lily 2003-03-28 ch 8, | abuseHm... Is she pregnant? Anyway, please write the next chapter soon! |
| Scribe Figaro 2003-02-19 ch 8, | abuseOOh! I like it! Update soon! |
| Miss Maggie 2003-02-02 ch 1, | abuseI'm flipping through the FF.Net archives, and I come across this... yay! I like the Miroku/Sango-ness, there's just not enough of that around here. Like the fic, and I crossing my fingers for a happy ending. ^_^ Hmmm. I wonder how Miroku and Sango got engaged? Well, I guess that is something I'll have to wait and see about that, I suppose. I'll keep waiting for the next part, anyway. ^^ |