|Reviews for Awaiting Your Return|
| ACLyoko 4/7/13 . chapter 1
Awnnn That was... away too cute! I can totally see Munto collaps when he knows! lol
I love it! Just wish it was in the anime too...
| alexbonita 4/4/13 . chapter 1
me gusto mucho tu historia me lei despues de traducirla, asi que muchas gracias
| rats xp 4/1/13 . chapter 1
I TOTALLY LOVE IT!
i'd also love to see a pic/sketch of the baby (if that is at all possible)
| Animecookie13 2/10/13 . chapter 1
AWWWWWWWW, god! there is a humongous smile on my face right now! You made my day!
| Rizaidym 2/8/13 . chapter 1
...I thought Celestials were made, rather than born? Or did I miss something? 'Cuz I kinda expected a bit more freak out from Munto.
| AnimeHannah 10/20/12 . chapter 1
I laughed so hard when they started bickering and when Munto fainted!
| RedWingedAngel002 4/14/12 . chapter 1
Wait.. wait.. give me a moment...
Oh, Bebe, this is lovely...! ;; The fluff is killing me- a death I'd gladly accept any day. :D
But really, you did a beautiful job with the pace and overall futuristic plot. War is definitely a possibility, despite the Akuto being returned.
I have to admit, your writing has definitely bumped up a good notch! I loved the interaction between Rui and Ichiko and the 'tsundere in the house.' That made me laugh. Oh, priceless! XD I'll probably say more, but it's still kinda soaking in. w A nice, hot, fluff soak. Lol.
I found some very minor errors:
"I-I know your still young... (*You're)
Honeymoon. Uh.. (I think it's one word?)
They weren't flustered much around each other *anymore. (It's one word.)
All in all, beautiful job! I can't wait to see more updates from you! 3