Awnnn That was... away too cute! I can totally see Munto collaps when he knows! lol

I love it! Just wish it was in the anime too...

*hugs*

-Lyoko

me gusto mucho tu historia me lei despues de traducirla, asi que muchas gracias

I TOTALLY LOVE IT!
i'd also love to see a pic/sketch of the baby (if that is at all possible)

AWWWWWWWW, god! there is a humongous smile on my face right now! You made my day!

...I thought Celestials were made, rather than born? Or did I miss something? 'Cuz I kinda expected a bit more freak out from Munto.

I laughed so hard when they started bickering and when Munto fainted!

Wait.. wait.. give me a moment...

*grosssobbing*

Oh, Bebe, this is lovely...! ;; The fluff is killing me- a death I'd gladly accept any day. :D

But really, you did a beautiful job with the pace and overall futuristic plot. War is definitely a possibility, despite the Akuto being returned.

I have to admit, your writing has definitely bumped up a good notch! I loved the interaction between Rui and Ichiko and the 'tsundere in the house.' That made me laugh. Oh, priceless! XD I'll probably say more, but it's still kinda soaking in. w A nice, hot, fluff soak. Lol.

I found some very minor errors:

"I-I know your still young... (*You're)

Honeymoon. Uh.. (I think it's one word?)

They weren't flustered much around each other *anymore. (It's one word.)

All in all, beautiful job! I can't wait to see more updates from you! 3