Awesome story so far! Update ASAP!

Wow... I never thought this would get updated... I couldn't believe my fragging eyes! XD You're right... Victory needs a lot more love. Especially for the Destrons. I'm sorry, but poor Leozack just tries so hard and doesn't even get ANYWHERE but yelled at and beaten up. From both sides. ):

One little thing: I think the Autobots are referred to as 'Cybertrons' rather than 'Cybertronians'.

Nuuuuuu! ): I feel so bad for Lyzack... And I've never liked Deathsaurus. Please update sooooon! I wanna see more Leozack... There should be some Leozack x Lyzack fluff, too. I'd like to see those two growing up side by side. :D

Keep up the good work! :D

Noooooo! Too many cliffhangers! *rolls on floors sobbing* MY BABIES CANNOT DIEEEE!

I do love the writing style this fic has, though! You've done a great job so far! :D I look forward to an update!

*is down on knees* Please, PLEASE continue this. there are not many HellbatxLeozack fics and I love this one! please continue it soon!

Aw... It's nice to find SOME Leozack fanfics. :) And pretty good ones, luckily (albeit the only ones). Strange... I've never even seen TFV and already I'm fascinated by Leozack... Mostly because of his resemblance to Starscream... And Lyzack... Wow, 'Starscream' with a sister is something which seems like an interesting concept. :)

Ooh! I wonder if Hellbat could get jealous with Leozack and Lyzack's brother/sister relationship? XD I'd like to see the two of them fighting over Leozack! ROFL

You can't seriously not finish this! Please update this!

Goddamn! I don't know that much about TFV (I've read a little on it thanks to TFwiki) but with this story you make me want to check out Victory episodes. I will eagerly await for the next chapter to see if Hellbat lives or dies.

oh my gosh!

PLEASE continue thus story! I am literally crying! this was so sad! :' (

I am loving this and Hellbat just...aww...*sniffles* toying with my emotions...waah...