| Reviews for Thanksgiving Monologue |
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theredrobin 4/22/12 . chapter 1This was an interesting look into Pudge's head and it sounds like him, being driven to distraction by the air of mystery surrounding Alaska. There are a few awkwardly worded turns of phrase and some minor mistakes, but the grammar and sentence structure in this is good, especially if English isn't your native language. Nice job. |