|Reviews for Pardoned Discretions|
| Holly 5/16/13 . chapter 1
Finding great fiction like yours on is like finding a gold nugget in the depths of a coalmine. This brought me to tears at the end. You definitely have a talent there!
| Henry VII 1/5/13 . chapter 1
I'm out of words. Your writing is perfect. I read this immediately after watching, and I cried :'(
I feel really bad about them both :'(
| Chibi Ven 12/31/12 . chapter 1
I...have no words for this. You had me starting to cry at the end. The relationship between these two is just...amazing. You did a very good job or portraying the characters and their relationship.
| Charisasori 10/14/12 . chapter 1
This is an amazing piece of writing. I think it really captures what they were both feeling. I really pity Ramses. You've done a fantastic job of weaving emotion into this story.
| LuluCalliope 4/16/12 . chapter 1
Clever Author's Note!
Sad story...but what can you expect, when the villain is more like a tragic Shakespearean character?
I love this! I think that the scene where Rameses is introduced to the concept of having a little brother is very moving, partially because Miriam is looking on, coming to terms with losing a baby brother.
| DarkAngel048 4/16/12 . chapter 1
| Lahiwe 4/15/12 . chapter 1
This is absolutely beautiful. It really made me start to get that tense feeling behind my eyes that comes when you're about to cry. It ended before I actually started,though. I love this movie so much, and that part when Rameses is calling out to Moses when Moses is running away to the desert just cuts right through me. I like that you chose first person; i like the somewhat choppy sentence style. It just works. Thank you for writing this!