Finding great fiction like yours on is like finding a gold nugget in the depths of a coalmine. This brought me to tears at the end. You definitely have a talent there!

I'm out of words. Your writing is perfect. I read this immediately after watching, and I cried :'(
I feel really bad about them both :'(

I...have no words for this. You had me starting to cry at the end. The relationship between these two is just...amazing. You did a very good job or portraying the characters and their relationship.

This is an amazing piece of writing. I think it really captures what they were both feeling. I really pity Ramses. You've done a fantastic job of weaving emotion into this story.

Clever Author's Note!

Sad story...but what can you expect, when the villain is more like a tragic Shakespearean character?

I love this! I think that the scene where Rameses is introduced to the concept of having a little brother is very moving, partially because Miriam is looking on, coming to terms with losing a baby brother.

Great work!

Good fic!

This is absolutely beautiful. It really made me start to get that tense feeling behind my eyes that comes when you're about to cry. It ended before I actually started,though. I love this movie so much, and that part when Rameses is calling out to Moses when Moses is running away to the desert just cuts right through me. I like that you chose first person; i like the somewhat choppy sentence style. It just works. Thank you for writing this!