|Reviews for Heart's False Start|
| NayaboobiesabsassRivera 5/12/13 . chapter 5
"You sent her off to a war already wounded." I absolutely loved Mama Maribel and all that she had to say, finally someone standing up for santana (besides brittany). But anyway, i absolutely loved this and your writing style
| NayaboobiesabsassRivera 5/12/13 . chapter 4
Holy fuxking shit
| Croutonn 4/30/13 . chapter 5
| kaylee214 4/30/13 . chapter 5
This is the first Glee story I have read and reviewed...I was in tears with that last chapter you captured everything so perfectly...wonderful!
| bh9 4/27/13 . chapter 5
This was EPIC! You are so talented! There was so much emotion in it; especially when Santana screams at Q and B to get out. So so so good :) xx
| bh9 4/27/13 . chapter 4
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOO :O I need to read the next chapter!
| Guest 4/26/13 . chapter 5
i can't find any words to describe this fic! it's amazingly great even beyond amazingly great. i loved all the characters and it is very realistic, imo.
| jesterjessie 4/22/13 . chapter 5
I remember finding this story towards the end of 2012, before you'd added the final chapter. I remember crying because it was so beautiful, and because it hurt so much, and because you made me terrified for Santana (and for Bobby), and because I was worried there wouldn't be a final update. And now...I've just sat and read the whole thing through again, and it's 7 o'clock in the morning here and I feel drained in the very best of ways. I think I've poured all my emotions into the story just reading it, in which case I can't praise you enough for writing it, because God knows how that felt. There aren't many stories that make me feel like yours has; there's protectiveness, pride, sadness, despair, deep joy, hope and, God, even jealousy warring in my head, because Quinn and Santana's love is so beautiful in its brokenness, in its pure power of emotion.
I hope you have people to remind you of how talented you are. I hope you realise it, because it is scary how powerful these words became, how many times you used them to build up your readers, only to break them down, much like with Quinn and Santana. I'm sorry that this review isn't particularly coherent, but I'm struggling to understand the ball of feelings caused by this story; I just wanted you to know it's fantastic, absolutely fantastic, and I'm not sure I'll ever forget it.
| Etrebs 4/20/13 . chapter 5
It's a great story, but I'm not sure I can forgive you for whacking Santana. True depiction of war's damages, though
| Guest 4/3/13 . chapter 5
Will there be a part 2? This is too good! x
| Guest 3/24/13 . chapter 5
I cried my heart out with this chapter. It was so damn good ö
| Shananigan 3/22/13 . chapter 5
Epic ending chapter. Thank you for sharing
| ac2790 3/10/13 . chapter 1
Hey i love alll your stories there dark and fluffy at the same time. i'm in the process of writing my first story on here it's call you see her, all of her. and it very dark and involves drug addiction violence rape child molestation murder. everything. please check it out your opinion would mean a lot.
| holdmetonight 3/8/13 . chapter 5
This was incredible. Wow
| sosaysthelipless 3/6/13 . chapter 5
Just read this all over two days and it was lovely and heartbreaking and perfect. One of my favorite things was how much it respected all of the characters, and how terrific a lot of the Brittany stuff was.