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Problem Free Philosophy
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
Amazing. Just amazing. Emotion captured perfectly. Almost made me tear up. Always wondered how Nala felt after Simba "died". This basically gets the jist of it, i'd imagine...the depressed feelings Nala experiences, the constant tears, etc...you nailed it!
Aquaman52
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
Wow...it's not every day I find a fic (or an author) this good, but I guess today's my lucky day. Just like your other fic I read a minute ago, this one was (again) brilliant, with everybody in character and everything as neat as can be organization-wise. I can totally see Rafiki doing something like that, as well as Nala reacting like that...makes me wish I had time to deviate from my own story and delve into something that isn't AU! Maybe I will anyway...

I'm gonna have to make more time to read through your archives...see you in a bit, I guess.
Lourdes1897
2009-10-02 . chapter 1
Beautiful work my dear, your story is awesome!
I specially love how touching and heartwarming was the interactions of Zazu and Nala, and those tears in the haughty eyes were priceless.

Thank you so much for this story.
avatar1995
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
nice, you should make one more chapter! Have nala find out that Simba is not really dead. that would be awsome!
KingKovusFinestFling
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Wow... Wow Wow Wow. Absolutely amazen. Really it is. It was exactly how i pictured the story from nalas view. And the way u made rafiki act is him is perfect. Take this from a TLK fan. But this story was awesome. very Very VERY Good Job. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . / . . . . KKFF=)
Monjaru [not signed up yet]
2008-08-16 . chapter 1
I must say that I was very impressed with this. Everything was just amazing. When I started reading, I wasn't expecting to get much from it, but by the end, I was really getting into it.

I'm going to agree with what a few of the others have said in that you really should continue with this. Continue on through the story because you really have talent.

Honestly, the only thing I can think to critique is to spend just a little more time editing. Mostly for spelling and grammatical errors. Nothing major, just a few things throughout that were misspelled or slightly misworded. Other than that, keep up the good work and I hope to see more of your brilliant work. ^_^
bloodspawn
2008-06-21 . chapter 1
im really soft. I hated the first half. not hate hatd but that it almost made me burst into tears. i cry at anything. shouldn't write as im starting to cry as im reading it again.* thats 5 stars for u well done. if it was longer i would give 6/6 or with a sequal to it
Qzil
2007-12-20 . chapter 1
That was so sweet...and so sad, i really can't put it into words.
spiritstallion
2007-11-21 . chapter 1
This is really sweet I loved it
scuta5
2007-04-22 . chapter 1
Nala is my favorite character of "The Lion King" Universe. This story is so touching, emotional, and spiritual. It is very good. I'm going to add this in my fave story list.

I hope you haven't completed this story. If you want to check out my Nala story, It is called "The Lioness Queen" Only if you have time.

Farewell from "Scuta the white warrior lion"
King Simba II
2007-03-02 . chapter 1
Wow! Amazing fic!
I like the way you described the emotions, the way you don't make Nala or the rest out of character! You're amazing!

Keep it up! I hope your future fics are as wonderful as this one!
-KS.
Fallen Dragonfly
2007-02-02 . chapter 1
Life is precious. I only wish I could make myself believe that.
Nice story.
loonytunecrazy
2006-11-25 . chapter 1
A lovely stoy I enjoyed it
2 lazy 2 log in
2006-06-29 . chapter 1
dude how the heck sad can a fic get?!?!? that is the most i have ever cried...ever...omg
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2006-06-04 . chapter 1
Oh that was so beutiful. I loved it!
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