|Reviews for Paradox High School Romance|
| The Queen of Double Standards 5/15/13 . chapter 8
SeeU and Kaito! I want them together! Please update soon I need more!
| The Queen of Double Standards 5/15/13 . chapter 7
This story is like an abridged series or parody for writers. It's incredibly addictive, so I'm dreading catching up to the last chapter. I love SeeU though, and the reference to dating sims was awesome. Keep on writing!
| The Queen of Double Standards 5/15/13 . chapter 6
So I was rereading this and realized I never reviewed the later chapters, so here I go.
I adore this store because it's so simple and sweet and funny. Mew's sarcastic nature is a nice touch onto it all too keep cliches at bay, and the characters are all super likeable. Like Luka and Gakupo. I loved the addition of those two here.
| yiseunggi 3/14/13 . chapter 8
Before I start talking about this chapter, I want to tell you two things. One, I'm sorry for reviewing so late. I don't know why but everything was a mess ever since I went on a six hour trip to/from Oregon. My sleeping pattern was messed up and I haven't had the time to properly review until now. So I'm sorry about that. And two, I wouldn't exactly call this a "proper" review because it's not. I'm holding a ice cream cone in one hand while typing this with my other hand. It's really hard but I'll try my best!
You know, I remember reading this chapter when it first came out. And I reread it again a few minutes ago and all I can think of is one thing. As I was reading this, I started thinking about KaitoxSeeU. The ending made me think about it and...well...I think it's cute. I'm not fond of this crack pairing yet but I have a feeling that my feeling for this pairing will soon grow like YuumaxSeeU and SeeWooxSeeU.
Anyway I just wanted to say that I feel bad for Kaito. The whole love triangle thing going on and Kaito unable to be with Miku. It's kind of complicated, but I still love it. XD Go Kaito! Whoot! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Update soon Minny! :)
| DeathThePanda 2/10/13 . chapter 5
Oops. I was wrong in my last review! Sorry! My iPod spazzed. They were different! Sorry again.
| DeathThePanda 2/10/13 . chapter 6
Hi! New reader here! This story is amazing. It's unique from other stories with the narrator and everything. When I read chapter five I was excited because I had one more chapter, but they were the same. D:
| Ryuchu 1/19/13 . chapter 6
Another chapter! Huzzah!
I really enjoyed the juxtaposition of Mew's thoughts with what was actually happening around her, particularly when she realized that she was following around Gumi instead of Miku; her interactions with Gakupo were also nice and made me giggle. :) Although, that part made me wonder; when she narrates for herself in the 3rd person, is she finally admitting that she's just as wrapped up in this little high-school drama as everyone else? Hmmm...it'll be interesting to see where the develops.
You know, the way that Mew narrates this makes me think that she's either a closet fangirl who greatly enjoys real-life shipping or she just has no friends and likes to make up little drama filled stories for everything that's happening around her. XD
Also...for some reason, I can picture he using sock puppets or something of the like (while looking completely disinterested) to describe the story thus-far to someone who hasn't been keeping up.
But all my silliness aside, another great chapter with effective use of a very unique narrative style! Can't wait to read mooooooore! :D
| yiseunggi 1/18/13 . chapter 6
Oh my gosh, I thought I was watching a drama! The LenxGumi part made me lean in on my computer screen and read everything reaaalllllyyyyy slowly. XD I love dramas! Fanfiction dramas, TV dramas, oh I love it all! Especially when my favorite characters/idols appear. :)
I just totally burst out laughing at the beginning when Luka and Gakupo were doing the whole "Yes-No" argument. I love those. :)
Anyway I'm dying to know what happens next in the story! What will Miku do? I must know soon! As usual, fantastic chapter. I loved every part of it.
Oh, before I forget, I found an error. "He's spazzing mentally. the words he just spit out repeating endlessly." Isn't the "t" in "the" supposed to be capitalized because it's after a period?
Update soon, okay? :)
| 98-Anonymous 1/17/13 . chapter 6
Pfftt... this is seriously.. hilarious? Entertaining? I wanted to laugh out loud when I read this, but then my friends would think I was crazy or something.
You definitely did a good job. It's really amusing. and... update soon!
| yiseunggi 1/6/13 . chapter 5
"...she has unwillingly created a love triangle of epic (–ly stupid) proportions." LOLOLOL that's the BEST ending EVER! You seriously need to update this fanfic! I want to know what's going to happen next! ;A;
Before I forget, I absolutely adore the picture of Mew in the cover. Her expression makes me smile. :)
Today's the last day of my break and I wasn't feeling too happy about it since I start school tomorrow and I forgot everything I learned in class, so I logged on into fanfiction thinking that reading fanfics could make me feel better. But then I suddenly remembered I needed to reivew this so I started reading this fanfic, and by the time I finished, I was laughing and smiling so hard that my sides hurt. :D I My Me Mine, you make me feel so happy whenever I read your fanfics. :)
Back in chapter 3 when the whole bomb thing was going on, I was thinking, "No way. That's impossible." But then everything sounded so real that I actually began to believe that Neru really did hide a bomb. But when Lola was talking about Miku sleeping, I started giggling because everything was just a dream and it had me completely fooled!
You must update this soon. For real. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :3
| The Queen of Double Standards 10/16/12 . chapter 5
Ahaha the Gakupo interference is amazing. And let's get ready for the love triangle! Please update soon! I really adore your story. It's so cute and uniquely portrayed.
| The Queen of Double Standards 10/16/12 . chapter 4
...How did I not see that there are two new chapters? I swear I was subscribed for alerts...
Anyway, I love Neru and Gumi's sass. And I must be a fangirl for thinking immediately "Eggplant ice." :P
Mew, be glad to be a cool second heroine! We love you!
Masochist! Best ending ever! Great chapter, keep up the good work!
| DarkOppressor 9/7/12 . chapter 1
So many broken walls.
I LOVE IT! Those snide remarks, the /ahem/ slight yaoi referencing, and MEW! Keep it up and I promise you a good number of people will start noticing this written art.
| Ryuchu 6/1/12 . chapter 3
I really liked this chapter. In particular, I love how Mew directly interacted with and commented on the story as it was happening. It was also interesting to see how Mew was both a character in the story and a snarky narrator at the same time.
This chapter was so random, but I feel like even having a super random chapter captures the nature of cliche romance stories. I can't wait to see how you handle all the other tropes of romance stories! There are a couple I'm really looking forward to...
Keep up the awesome work!
| The Queen of Double Standards 5/30/12 . chapter 3
Mew has such a cynical type of humour. I love it. And I love all her commentary on all the cliches.
At the beginning, "a average day" should be "an average day".