SeeU and Kaito! I want them together! Please update soon I need more!

This story is like an abridged series or parody for writers. It's incredibly addictive, so I'm dreading catching up to the last chapter. I love SeeU though, and the reference to dating sims was awesome. Keep on writing!

So I was rereading this and realized I never reviewed the later chapters, so here I go.

I adore this store because it's so simple and sweet and funny. Mew's sarcastic nature is a nice touch onto it all too keep cliches at bay, and the characters are all super likeable. Like Luka and Gakupo. I loved the addition of those two here.

Before I start talking about this chapter, I want to tell you two things. One, I'm sorry for reviewing so late. I don't know why but everything was a mess ever since I went on a six hour trip to/from Oregon. My sleeping pattern was messed up and I haven't had the time to properly review until now. So I'm sorry about that. And two, I wouldn't exactly call this a "proper" review because it's not. I'm holding a ice cream cone in one hand while typing this with my other hand. It's really hard but I'll try my best!

You know, I remember reading this chapter when it first came out. And I reread it again a few minutes ago and all I can think of is one thing. As I was reading this, I started thinking about KaitoxSeeU. The ending made me think about it and...well...I think it's cute. I'm not fond of this crack pairing yet but I have a feeling that my feeling for this pairing will soon grow like YuumaxSeeU and SeeWooxSeeU.

Anyway I just wanted to say that I feel bad for Kaito. The whole love triangle thing going on and Kaito unable to be with Miku. It's kind of complicated, but I still love it. XD Go Kaito! Whoot! I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Update soon Minny! :)

Oops. I was wrong in my last review! Sorry! My iPod spazzed. They were different! Sorry again.

Hi! New reader here! This story is amazing. It's unique from other stories with the narrator and everything. When I read chapter five I was excited because I had one more chapter, but they were the same. D:

Another chapter! Huzzah!

I really enjoyed the juxtaposition of Mew's thoughts with what was actually happening around her, particularly when she realized that she was following around Gumi instead of Miku; her interactions with Gakupo were also nice and made me giggle. :) Although, that part made me wonder; when she narrates for herself in the 3rd person, is she finally admitting that she's just as wrapped up in this little high-school drama as everyone else? Hmmm...it'll be interesting to see where the develops.

You know, the way that Mew narrates this makes me think that she's either a closet fangirl who greatly enjoys real-life shipping or she just has no friends and likes to make up little drama filled stories for everything that's happening around her. XD

Also...for some reason, I can picture he using sock puppets or something of the like (while looking completely disinterested) to describe the story thus-far to someone who hasn't been keeping up.

But all my silliness aside, another great chapter with effective use of a very unique narrative style! Can't wait to read mooooooore! :D

Oh my gosh, I thought I was watching a drama! The LenxGumi part made me lean in on my computer screen and read everything reaaalllllyyyyy slowly. XD I love dramas! Fanfiction dramas, TV dramas, oh I love it all! Especially when my favorite characters/idols appear. :)

I just totally burst out laughing at the beginning when Luka and Gakupo were doing the whole "Yes-No" argument. I love those. :)

Anyway I'm dying to know what happens next in the story! What will Miku do? I must know soon! As usual, fantastic chapter. I loved every part of it.

Oh, before I forget, I found an error. "He's spazzing mentally. the words he just spit out repeating endlessly." Isn't the "t" in "the" supposed to be capitalized because it's after a period?

Update soon, okay? :)

Pfftt... this is seriously.. hilarious? Entertaining? I wanted to laugh out loud when I read this, but then my friends would think I was crazy or something.

You definitely did a good job. It's really amusing. and... update soon!

"...she has unwillingly created a love triangle of epic (–ly stupid) proportions." LOLOLOL that's the BEST ending EVER! You seriously need to update this fanfic! I want to know what's going to happen next! ;A;

Before I forget, I absolutely adore the picture of Mew in the cover. Her expression makes me smile. :)

Today's the last day of my break and I wasn't feeling too happy about it since I start school tomorrow and I forgot everything I learned in class, so I logged on into fanfiction thinking that reading fanfics could make me feel better. But then I suddenly remembered I needed to reivew this so I started reading this fanfic, and by the time I finished, I was laughing and smiling so hard that my sides hurt. :D I My Me Mine, you make me feel so happy whenever I read your fanfics. :)

Back in chapter 3 when the whole bomb thing was going on, I was thinking, "No way. That's impossible." But then everything sounded so real that I actually began to believe that Neru really did hide a bomb. But when Lola was talking about Miku sleeping, I started giggling because everything was just a dream and it had me completely fooled!

You must update this soon. For real. I'll be waiting for the next chapter! :3

Ahaha the Gakupo interference is amazing. And let's get ready for the love triangle! Please update soon! I really adore your story. It's so cute and uniquely portrayed.

...How did I not see that there are two new chapters? I swear I was subscribed for alerts...

Anyway, I love Neru and Gumi's sass. And I must be a fangirl for thinking immediately "Eggplant ice." :P

Mew, be glad to be a cool second heroine! We love you!

Masochist! Best ending ever! Great chapter, keep up the good work!

So many broken walls.

So.

Many.

I LOVE IT! Those snide remarks, the /ahem/ slight yaoi referencing, and MEW! Keep it up and I promise you a good number of people will start noticing this written art.

I really liked this chapter. In particular, I love how Mew directly interacted with and commented on the story as it was happening. It was also interesting to see how Mew was both a character in the story and a snarky narrator at the same time.

This chapter was so random, but I feel like even having a super random chapter captures the nature of cliche romance stories. I can't wait to see how you handle all the other tropes of romance stories! There are a couple I'm really looking forward to...

Keep up the awesome work!

Mew has such a cynical type of humour. I love it. And I love all her commentary on all the cliches.

At the beginning, "a average day" should be "an average day".