Wow k that was really good loved it
I know you probably gave up on writing this but could you start again. Pretty please i want a sequil to this story sooo badly and your swing of one is perfect :) plus you cant just leave it there i mean with that girl coming in total cliff hanger!

Brilliant, can't wait to find out what happens next. Who's the girl?...

great story! i've been wanting to read a sequal for a while now and this is perfect! thanks for your story and plz keep writing!

please continue this story. i love it