i loved the way you keep the people interested in the story by going back and forth with the characters. i realy wish you could write the next chapter

well this was a pretty good fic. i like how dramatic you made it and the twist between issei and sakura was a nice touch with rins usual teasing. i hope you continue this fic. it has alot of potential, i have one of my own it's not that good but i'd like you to give me some pointers. it's and evangelion fic called

memories of the souls of life
i hope you read it i could use the feed back and i hope to see more of this fic too

I think I like your story, but I'm not sure. It'd be nice if the chapters were longer so I could get a better grasp on the plot (if ther is on) and it really lacks details and descriptions. But please keep working on it.

Issei's adorable!!! Even if he was a girl, I'm glad people think he's cool. The yaoi kiss was the most heartrending part of PSME, to me anyways.
However, I think you should take Rin's classmate, Ayanokouji Ayumi (surname first!), into consideration. According to people who have read the entire manga, the series ends with Jinpachi liking Ayumi. Then again, Jinpachi isn't exactly a loyal lover...
Issei rocks!
This is a good start, so don't get discouraged. Keep an eye out for my future stories, too. I've got them all planned out; they're mostly crossovers in that they have a reoccurring location, but everyone gets what they deserve. ::schemer-dreamer's grin::
Feel free to e-mail me! (Galactiger@aol.com)

I really liked your sytory! It has one minus though; chapters ary MUCH too short!
Please continue!
Please save my... ekhm... sanity, or something...
^__^

Fun. Yeah not many PSME. Tsktsk. I'll r+r, if you continue!

I was reading your fic even when it was an R!! (^_^) And I'm sorry that I didn't review!!! Yep, yep, there's always a lack of PSME fics... and it's great to see another!! I'll keep on reading the chapters as they come out... just so you know that you have some faithful fans!! BTW, I love that title!!!

pwp? nice start but too short and the title...^^;;; Well i agree there aren't that many PSME :( and it's such a great and angsty story. I love all the characters and wish there were more fics . My favorite is Issei/Enju (i love both they're 2 in 1 ne ^^)

yo that waz a kool story and i loved the title well bye bye

cute fic! and thanks for the review on mine!
~ Ryoko Porter