| Reviews for Brothers in Steel |
|---|
ero-sennin56 6/11/13 . chapter 38Why don't you have the reapers call a truce to fight to even them an abomination of life together with organics and when it's over have the reapers consider trying to do the third choice(cannot remember the name) but without sacrifice of an alive human such as shepard because I've yet to see a fic like this |
Spriggs 6/6/13 . chapter 38 WORST FIC EVER |
Mercenary X 6/6/13 . chapter 38I have to say that after reading, everything is hard to read. It was paced poorly, too many jumps in scenes and everyone felt too disjointed. |
Lyro the Hedgehog 6/6/13 . chapter 38I don't get it shouldn't you start with the first phase? |
project 501D13R 6/6/13 . chapter 37no offense, but Samara dying, that's just making Shepard hold the idiot ball, seriously in game paragon interrupt that you take to save her. hell the chief would have seen what Samara was planning and stopped her. |
Dracconnis 6/6/13 . chapter 38Loved the update |
Jebest4781 6/5/13 . chapter 38love that you had John and Liara go out on a date and it was really suprising that you had 'The Illusive Man' actually come in person to chat with John. hope that you could do the Citadel DLC pretty soon since that is a very great DLC and no one on the site has done that for their story just yet |
edboy4926 6/5/13 . chapter 38Good chapter |
wereknight 6/5/13 . chapter 37Why did you let Samara die redo this chapter me is not happy. |
edboy4926 6/4/13 . chapter 37Dude, what the heck is wrong with you!? You bloody kill Samara. Damn you. Either way, well written chapter. (Professional opinion) Horrible chapter. (Personal opinion) As for the A.I. situation, I have no problem with your way of looking. If anything, Halo A.I.s are more attuned to emotion while ME A.I.s are more attuned to logic. |
arbiter650 6/4/13 . chapter 37I actually agree with that assertion about mass effect AI being more advanced... To a degree. Emotional simulation is something that is lacking in Mass Effects AI, and the only thing that prevents Halo AI from rebelling and destroying all life over and over again |
The Critical One 6/4/13 . chapter 37They aren't more advanced, they are just made differently. Smart AIs are made from brains, ME AIs are different. And EDI or any other AI could NEVER hope to even hold a candle to any Military grade AI from Halo. It just couldn't happen. They sacrifice power for longevity, which is ridiculous. |
Fulliron 6/4/13 . chapter 37Why didn't Shepard use her Paragon interrupt? She could have saved Samara so easily. What a tragic waste of life... |
Jebest4781 6/4/13 . chapter 37suprised that you decided to kill off Samara since I liked her a lot in the story and thought that you could of had John stop Samara from killing herself |
cnason1 6/3/13 . chapter 36Love the story so far, more soon please! |