Share/Save/Bookmark
Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: Their Mistakes

The Other Troubadour
2002-08-01
ch 7,
abuseThat was so adorable..not crap! Good Job.
Jewls13
2002-06-12
ch 7,
abuse"I want you to be happy. And I want you to be with me. I just don't know if those two go hand in hand."
that is the best line!
TheEvilDooer
2002-06-06
ch 6,
abuseAHHHHHHH!!!!!!! X________X;; You can't leave it there, you evil evil person!!!!!! omg, i wanna know what happens... they HAVE to get together!!! They've been in too many fights so far in your fic! PUT THEM TOGETHER!!!!!! waaaahhhhhhhh......... they belong together........

Great fic!! CONTINUE NOW!! I COMMAND YOU!!!!
airforcebrat529
2002-06-06
ch 6,
abuseOh no! You have to put them together, why is Luke being so mean! Please, write more soon. And add some Rory/Dean. I like it so far!
Luke Rules
2002-06-06
ch 6,
abuseGo with it! It's great - keep writing - you know they'll get together in the end, it's the tension that keeps us reading (and you, writing!) Thanks!
airforcebrat529
2002-06-05
ch 5,
abuseThis story is soooooooooooooooooooo awesome I love it, your doing a great job!
Jewls13
2002-06-05
ch 5,
abusevery good. I'm actully going to to go in slightly that direction with a L/L thing myself. With Luke being a commetment guy. ok, I like this
Parvulissula
2002-06-04
ch 4,
abuseGood job! Keep up the great work. "I'm an **." :) I'm hopin' to see how Lorelai proves it's not a phase?! You're a great writer.
Madison Faye
2002-06-03
ch 1,
abuseCool story, I think you've got Luke pretty much in character and everything same with Lorelai. Great job, I can't wait to read more so please keep writing!
katem-23
2002-06-01
ch 3,
abuseNO! that isn't funny!
well actually it is, hehehehehe
keeping the suspense up- nice JOB
give a few more roadblocks, if i know anything about GG it's that nothing ever comes without obstacles and compromises
besides, longer is better!
Luke Rules
2002-05-30
ch 2,
abuseAllie - you rock! Keep going!!!!
KEL-71E
2002-05-29
ch 2,
abusedarling- your chapters are backwards! hehe you mite wanna fix it up! great new chap tho, plz post soon! in the right order i hope! :)
KEL-71E
2002-05-28
ch 1,
abusethis is great! i hope you continue....maybe a longer chapter next time? :) ive only seen up to secrets and loans but i already know wots gunna happen....im a spoiler freak...but anyhoo plz continue!!!!!!

kel
Parvulissula
2002-05-28
ch 1,
abuse:'( and there's where Luke runs after her...right?! Seriously though, great job so far. Keep it up and write some more! =D
Return to Top