OMG you are an amazing writer! I LOVE THIS! I am obsessed (yes, like literally obsessed) with this show! Melissa Joan Hart is soooo good, don't ya think? Just one quickie suggestion. Try to separate the story into paragraphs, then it's easier to read. :)

love your story. Can't read the next chapter.

I can't to read the next chapter. Zelda is my favorite character.