W-what do you mean it doesn't have a thirteenth floor?!*gulp*

Update soon, pleases.

Moooooooooore DX

I know this hasn't been updated in quite a while, but I like the direction this is heading. Reminds me of Hetaoni. I'd love to see the next chapter, if you're still inspired to write it.

Evil... So very evil... I'm thinking Zoro and Sanji are gonna kill each other, and I wanna know who the mystery person is! Jeez Roo-Roo, even I didn't know you were /this/ evil...

I'm proud and scared all at the same time...

Dammit Roo-Roo! You really are evil! I watched a movie called Devil and it gave me nightmares, which is probably what inspired you to write this... Dammit! I don't want to read it but now I just have too...

Evil...

I hate you so much, and yet I am so very proud of you...

i loved it a lot and i hope you update sooooon and what is your anoter acount name?

and can you write mo a Shanks X ace story?

Well, this certainly is a refreshing change from the other stories in this fandom. I applaud you for a job well done. You're off to a good start. Limited grammar and punctuation errors. You're obviously a competent writer. I suggest you work a little on your sentence structure though. I look forward to your next chapter, good luck.

loved it a lot