|Reviews for The Devil's Unexpected Visit|
| Portgas D. Paula 12/5/12 . chapter 2
W-what do you mean it doesn't have a thirteenth floor?!*gulp*
Update soon, pleases.
| CrisStarTina 11/5/12 . chapter 2
| Mountain97 5/19/12 . chapter 2
I know this hasn't been updated in quite a while, but I like the direction this is heading. Reminds me of Hetaoni. I'd love to see the next chapter, if you're still inspired to write it.
| 1337kitsune 4/19/12 . chapter 2
Evil... So very evil... I'm thinking Zoro and Sanji are gonna kill each other, and I wanna know who the mystery person is! Jeez Roo-Roo, even I didn't know you were /this/ evil...
I'm proud and scared all at the same time...
| 1337kitsune 4/19/12 . chapter 1
Dammit Roo-Roo! You really are evil! I watched a movie called Devil and it gave me nightmares, which is probably what inspired you to write this... Dammit! I don't want to read it but now I just have too...
I hate you so much, and yet I am so very proud of you...
| azab 4/18/12 . chapter 2
i loved it a lot and i hope you update sooooon and what is your anoter acount name?
and can you write mo a Shanks X ace story?
| StrongerThanThat 4/18/12 . chapter 2
Well, this certainly is a refreshing change from the other stories in this fandom. I applaud you for a job well done. You're off to a good start. Limited grammar and punctuation errors. You're obviously a competent writer. I suggest you work a little on your sentence structure though. I look forward to your next chapter, good luck.
| azab 4/18/12 . chapter 1
loved it a lot