love the story, it made me want to have a brother.
Don't you sometimes find Noin annoying? just want to know your comments or opinion about her!

aawwee that was sweet. I love brother sister stories. (I'm a little sister so it's even sweeter)

i liked it. i always liked that part myself. and especially the part were heero comes for relena and they have their talk with millardo. i love that part. would you consider rewriting that part as well? please!

wow... such emtion... it really pulls a heart string. you're a great author, don't stop writing (especially on Made of You)

Thats so sad... you should write a sequel...

Sugoi! *applauds* I love it! it touched me. Keep up the good work

I love this. I love what Zechs and Relena mean to each other. Just love it.

Poor Zechs...you did a great job portraying him. The only thing I disagree with in this is when you said Relena was stolen away by the Darlians. It makes it sounds like it was against her will or something. But otherwise...wonderful job.

Oh, wow, this was so good. Not many people touch on Millardo/Zechs' conflict between his role as leader of the White Fang and his love of Relena. This is really well done.

That was woundeful. PLease keep on writing.

Hnn. Some bits of it were questionable, but on a broad scale I liked it very much - you managed to thoroughly explain the parts that were left open in the series, and still kept it believable. Commendable job. )

Wow! U really did get into Zechs/Milliardo's head! U should be more than semi-proud _ Very nice! Well written too, I commend u! Can't wait for more of your work 0:o)

hmmmmm...i saw that a different perspective,but good.)

Wonderful...

It's nice to see the sibling relations between these two!