|Reviews for Deviating|
| Guest 7/3/12 . chapter 3
*please excuse any typos as I'm on my phone! last comment I meant "I like" not "think."
Mike was a joke and so she dodged a bullet. the incident with the thumb wrestling guys, wow. Jake and Tyler need to chill, but then again it's understandable. hope you explore that dynamic more.
| Guest 7/3/12 . chapter 2
Her mother sounds like a lot of work. Poor Bella :/ I think her relationship with Bree and liked the imagery you conveyed throughout the scene in the park. well done.
| Guest 7/3/12 . chapter 1
Muffin and pumpkin could not be more gross in the "sweet" factor, heh. I doubt you'll come back to this but ima read on anyway.
| Shante17 4/21/12 . chapter 1
I can't wait to see this develop I have a feeling that it's gonna hit deep.