This is really well written! I like the portrayal of the loving brother relationship between Moses and Rameses. I like the detail of the time they went racing, that was one of my favorite parts in the movie, besides the beautiful songs of course.

aww come on, plz dont just leave me hanging, put up another part !

S.k.

It is wonderful! I love this bond between Moses and Rameses. I think Moses should'nt leave his home or he should try really talk with his brother, really talk - no "let my people go" and "this says the Lord" etc. etc.

Maybe he should'nt begin "Seti had blood of tausends children on his hands" but in other way?

Hmm. But it could'nt be.

I hope You'll write some AU about Moses who stayed with his family or something similar.

Greetings from Poland and may the Muses be with You!

aww thats sooo sweet, now im of to bed so i can read more tomorrow. great story so far! :P

S.k.

this is very sweet and brotherly! nice start.

Great fic and chapter! Can't wait to read more!