|Reviews for The Epic|
| anon 5/3/13 . chapter 1
green eyes, not brown
| son-of-puji 7/12/12 . chapter 1
I hope you continue this, because ending it at this part is evil! I like your writing style, I think it goes well with this story.
Just some remarks:
- I think we know his name: Roy Walker - but honestly, it doesnt make any difference.
- Just a question: is it sheer accident that you named her sis Evelyn, like the nurse in the movie?
- The POV change is confusing in the end, and to be honest, I'm not sure I get why you changed, to begin with. I think you should either stick to third person (I'd choose that) or go with Alexandria POV, then (as I suppose) when Roy comes, switch to his POV.
But other than these, please continue, because I'm really intrigued:)
| EmpireX 6/23/12 . chapter 1
The switch from 3rd person to 1st person is a little jarring, but I would love to read more!
| RenjiNight 6/20/12 . chapter 1
I love it so far I am sad there are not a lot of fall stories. I love how you wrote this and I love how it just falls together it has a nice flow