While Murodck's more my favorite, this story is shaping up to be really good. There are so many great lines among the chapters, I can't pick one favorite! I liked the line about the elephant in the room in this chapter, the awkwardness between Face and Amy when he told her where the clean towels were instead of what he really wanted to say. Good cliffhanger at the end of this chapter. I'll be waiting for more!

"Oh man but who gonna take care of the fool?" I loved that part.

Amy, next time, keep your mouth shut. A simple 'no he didn't' would've sufficed.

Hanibal can sense there was something between Face and Amy. And I bet after hearing Amys story and seeing Faces reaction he doesn't want Gace to get hurt emotionally by Amy.

Maybe with her watching Face they can talk and work things out. With whatever is going on with this guy the team can't have any problem with the members. They all need to be able to work together.

And here is another reprimands, great.

He is long and very well written.

Amy is back, she meets alone with face which begins to have a temperature. I like ;-)

I like the passage where Hannibal gives drugs to Face so that he remains quiet.

Really very well.

Bravo

Interesting...looking forward to reading more!

Waouh, that begins hardly, very strong ;-)

I already like.

Amy, hurt Face and Murdock who worries.

Fast the suite B-)

I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Who is after Amy and why?

Great story so far, can't wait to read more!

Awe

Poor Face he tries to do something good helping Amy out and he gets hurt for it and she steals his Vette.

And I am guessing they had some kind of relationship with the per comment. And it didn't go to good at least for Face.

Where trouble goes there usually IS a woman involved somewhere...this should be interesting.

A very intriguing start! I am looking forward to more!