Good progression with story and characters. They really need to do something with Taro though he is being a real pain.
As i have said befor keep up the good work and keep it going for a long time to come. Hopefully more Queen Rat sometime soon as well.

Ever consider having a turkey shoot with Taro as the turkey?

this is still one of my favorite stories, keep up the great work.

I do agree with you on the curses. Ranma, Ryoga, and Shampoo's curses make sence. Mousse on the other hand there is not much to say about it, because he wasn't shown in either tha magna or the anima. I like your story it is good I will kept reading it.

there is one line that will work for the series.

With acceptance comes power and with power you get responesability and that will open the door to freedom, but it will only work if something happen to cause doubt.

I believe Rumiko Takahashi was tring to point out that no relationship will work out if there was no doubt.

your story points out if there is too much doubt something will good wrong.

The only problem I have with your fic is keeping all the OCs we don't see every chapter straight. Other than that I can't complain about chapter length or anything.

Nice chapter, I'm very impressed by how well Tagaki did against Ranma. Though I can't help but see one of the girls 'accidently' push him into the spring of drowned girl so they aren't reliant on the instant stuff. Or he could dunk himself voluntarily.

A good fight and a good chapter. I expect the best from you and you don't disappoint.

Yowzah! Another fine chapter under the keys. Only one thought to pursue: Though I doubt Ranma would do it because of his upbringing, who would she most likely select to be her Husband? Or is there possibly someone in her future who would qualify? Interesting possibilities.

Another good and well written chapter. Nice to see Tagaki finally make it official with Akame and impress Ranma with his strength. Will be very interesting to see what happens in China, hope that update is not far off.
Thanks for getting back to the longer chapters as i tend to find them more involving than short ones.
Keep this story going for many years please.

Interesting chapter, I'm glad the family is growing closer all around. I can't wait to see how things go in China.

book 9&10 was some love plot explaining the concept of tai tai for the 100th time. there was a ninja assault with no good suspect whatsoever and in book 10 someone wanted to wipe out dai lan, the only chinese jok that broke the rule about second wifes. suspects? none. you're in love with explaining the awesome relationships and the happiness that comes with it. there isn't any problem that can't be resolved. i think you are lost in romance and happiness. in your storyline you sacrifice stuff that matters just to write about the next sweet thing. you started good though. great romance comes with great drama and you are afraid to write about sadness. you even leave out some obvious trails in the storyline just to write about your happiness.
now i want you to finish the story about dai lan who was nearly wiped out by some overreacting chinese joketsutoku.
i don't really care about the ninja assault that clearly wasn't happosais doing alone but that was simply stupid. i think the nwc can accomplish more than just letting them go.
now i start reading your next book. i hope that it's no dull explanation of some new poligamic love sharing without great problems

I wonder how Nannichuan and Nyannichuan Spring water would affect OujiandXingXing.

A well done and nice chapter. I do hope you will start to get back into doing longer chapters though as i find the last few a bit short and i love long ones as you can get involved in the sdtory that way.

Well... this chapter was a bit scary, but interesting all the same. I'm glad you're getting back in the groove of writing regular updates, it's nice to have one of my favorite authors back.

Another excellent chapter. I did e-mail you about the one error I found. OujiandXingXing are going to have a very interesting life. But I recommend training by the Lord Dragon to allow them to physically seperate without pain of death. Their inability to be apart could be a great asset to enemies of the Joketsuzoko and Saotome clans. And I have no doubt that somewhere someone of evil intent now has that information.

Was reading the reviews and thought that diatribe on Chapter 2 was hilarious. Chapter 2. A _SEVEN_ year old chapter! At least half of the complaints were common formatting errors I see in several stories all the time! Where do these people come from?!?

Thanks for the work, Sarge. Can't wait too long for the next chapter!

PS... Anything upcoming on 'Queen Rat'?

Wow, this is actually pretty good, huh