Reviews for The Family Business

Reviews For: The Family Business

LinZE 2008-04-30 ch 11,	abuseagain with the crying! I love the way you've introduced and develped your characters and at the twists in the plot you keep adding I'm totally addicted and a huge fan thanks for sharing! xLx
teenahali 2007-08-29 ch 11,	abuseI'm very impressed with your fanfic storyline. I've read the whole "Death Brings Clarity" trilogy and thouroughly enjoyed it. However, I did have to go to your personal website to read the second part because you do not have it on You should realy add it to this site. I can't wait to get started on the next trilogy. I may have to wait a few days though...I get way too into the story and forget to do real work, eat, sleep etc. LOL Thanks for hours of enjoyable reading! Keep it up! teenahali
byrdgirl 2002-10-18 ch 6,	abuseVery nice as always. I love the whole dealing with three year olds thing. I'm teaching that age group right now and they're fascinating. My only nitpick(ever I think) is that Alex would probably be speaking in full sentences. I know lots of three year olds that do. They actually start immitating their parents speach at that age. And since Alex is such a bright kid,he would probably be talking up a storm. Otherwise, great action, great details, fabulous story! ^_^ byrdgirl
2002-06-24 ch 11, anon.	abuseOoooooo! I absolutly LOVED it! There was this freaky thing where my computer wouldn't load the 11nth chapter and I started to cry(Don't laugh at me!) I any case it was really good and I'll miss your writing while your off!
ArchNemesis 2002-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Just WOW. I am not a B/G 'shipper, but this trilogy is one of the most well-written fanfics I've ever read. Touching, exciting, funny... Giles is one of my favorite characters and you write him so well. For that matter, all of you characterizations are dead-on. It's difficult to write in so many different voices, but you've managed to do it. Your new characters are also excellent; it's tough to write kids, but Alex and Robin are adorable-but-real. The ending seems left open to sequel possibilities, so I hope to read more. Keep on writing! p.s.--Favorite line: Alex's "Angel big poof wif lame hair." Gotta love "Uncle Spike".

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