ok this looked great and started off fin, but farther i went it seemed to fall apart and i was haing roblems telling whats even going on at all . liked ht i ould read though.

*blinks rapidly* Reference to...Gaara the Insomniac?

anyone notice Gary said " I will never eat mushrooms AGAIN. " That means he has eaten them before

I was the one that you said "don't hurt me!" To in that jubilife chapter.

This is awesome!

The fangirls were fried and there was much rejoicing. . .ni! XD

So you're only doing important episodes? The AECEUS-master joke in the A/N made me chuckle; he's my favourite author. Good chapter, but it seems you were either half asleep or just dying when you wrote this: there were a lot of typos.

Good chapter. You wrote Paul perfectly. So are you going to be doing a Sinnoh rewrite? I don't really like the idea of Latias in a pokeball but I'm an altoshipper anyway.

Ignore the flames, continue as you are. This chapter was really good, the fight did not disappoint. I felt that ho oh was OOC but, so is pretty much everything in this fic, it still works :)

Ah nostalgia. I loved this movie. I would've had lucario go with Ash, instead of stay with Mew.

...red clearly held back during the battle. He could've easily knocked out both pokemon with just one attack from vee...hell if red used a magicarp he would've won in one move xD

Wait, did you see that?! One of the ellipses moved!

Ash with Latias? *dies with happiness* I'll read some more tomorrow.

Altomare, home to my two favourite pokemon :D well, one now but, anyway good chapter.

...so mewtwos' a British Arnold shwartzenegger from lord of the rings? CALLED IT! I shall read some more tomorrow. For now, it is off to bed.