|Reviews for What Can A King Do?|
| Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 5
| Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 4
I really like it, but it kind of seems a little mean of Alus to be kissing with Arc and Jesen. But it is really good. You have a real skill for writing. I can imagine the whole thing happening. I cannot wait to read on
Your BIGGEST FAN,
| Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 3
| Guest 12/29/12 . chapter 2
This is also really Fantabulous! I love your writing. I winder how Arc would look after ageing for six years.
Keep it up. It would be awesome if you(already have not) write about FF4
| IngusxArc 12/29/12 . chapter 1
This was a good chapter. Although I am a STRONG Fan of IngusXArc, I loved this. I am not familliar with Evangeline or the thief. Then again, I have not beaten the game. Final Fantasy III was my first game (DS) You are a great writter. Keep it up! I cannot wait to read more!
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| Streamer Dreamer 11/6/12 . chapter 2
Great Fic! Jesen better not hurt Arc. Arc is too cute to hurt.
| demonwindy 8/2/12 . chapter 5
NO! alus cant go to battle… his most adorable king of the cuties and uke/seme needs him!
COMA! ALUS YOU’RE NOT SUPPOUST TO COME BACK LIKE THAT!
Masked man – oh lord not another suitor. *face plam* lol
Huh I wonder who the masked man is. It can only be two people… or an unnamed suitor.
Jesen your not a good suitor if you go to drinking. Bad Jesen bad!
JESEN DID WHAT TO ALUS DURING THE WAR! *starts throwing pebbles at jesen* bad…bad bad. You made him do a mean thing to ark. Y.Y *hugs* but it’s okay cus I like you any way. :3
And now he loves Evangeline. -_- dude make up your mind!
Okay jesen you’re a pig… you love two people at once and you wan’t both. You can only have one. -_-
What he forgot! Alus. Y.Y
Wait where did arc go!? O.O arc stop hiding… that was mean to leave. How could you. Y.Y arc.
What… he has a crush on a girl… awww poor arc. Y.Y
What ever happened to ark’s scarf?
…Now that he has the scarf he is going to remember?
He got married… married! REALLY!?
And now they are pissed at each other?
Now they are making plans to have fun…in alus’ room… interesting. ;3
OMG! that sucks. well at least they still love each other and stuff.
I just love love love the story. i'm sorry i took a while to get to it... i've been a bit busy. lol.
| The Trailblazer 7/29/12 . chapter 5
IS IT THE END? ;_;
You're breaking my heart here! I need more you know xD
It was a really sad ending, I had hoped they would be together. Or that he would be with Jesen. Why was he kissing Jesen earlier, by the way? o.o And since you're an Arc fan I just have to say this: Arc seemed so hot when he was older! I know he was older already in the beginning but I was still imagining him like in the game but now when he stood there with Alus and the baby...*girly squeal* he seemed so mature and hot with his brown hair and eyes. At least in my brain ;D And I have a feeling you agree? xD And I'm glad they could confess their love in the end
I also hope that Jesen stays happy with Evangeline and refrains from drinking in the stables. It's not good for his health, and he needs to be healthy to protect his girlfriend and king! Can't wait to read more about these characters! I miss them already! *lightbulb appears* Can't they be a part of the Christmas story? :D
| demonwindy 7/18/12 . chapter 4
d-did arc and alus... did they just sleep together! O.O wow!
wow jasen and alus fighting! that shouldn't happen... they are friends... wow they both are on edge.
O.O wow alus... now your cheating on arc.
I love how he's back and forth... i just hope arc never finds out. he'll be devastated.
| The Trailblazer 7/11/12 . chapter 4
Wah? What? Why are they kissing again? Why was Alus jealous? He was jealous of Jesen protecting Evangeline, right? But he just spent the night with Arc! Giving him morning kisses and what not! Alus you player! You have to choose! Or both of them will get hurt! T.T Gah, line break doesn't work on my phone. But seriously, here I am, working on my vacation and thought I should read this to cheer me up but...I WANT MORE! Just one chapter wasn't enough xD Although I have to say it was a great chapter! Reading it was like watching it all happen right in front of me! Is it your theatrical skills that shines through to your writing? ;D
| The Trailblazer 6/2/12 . chapter 3
How come I didn't read it earlier Dx
Anyway, it's amazing how you can twist your stories and make me squeal over the cuteness and of excitement! So I'm really curious...Now Alus is with Arc it seems...And they will be spending the night...seems pretty hot for those cute, uke boys. But what about Arc kissing Jesen just like that? He has to explain himself! At least to me xD And poor Evangeline, she must've been exhausted for everything that's going on... I can't wait for you to give this story the happy ending it deserves Or no! Don't end it! I don't want it to end TT At least now yet...or for awhile! Gaah! It's all up to you!
Plus, I loved that line Jesen said...what was it? *goes back to the chapter and copies* "So glad he has his lips all over him… Jesen clenched his fist tightly." and also "he's smacking his lips over another guy." It made me laugh xD Even though I know it's pretty sad since he's jealous and all. It still sounded funny xD
And now, keep updating! ;D
| demonwindy 5/31/12 . chapter 3
luneth a dad! WOW!
ingus...i bet he's sara's personal bodyguard for more then one reason. hehehe.
aw those two are so cute. (arc and alus)
OMG THEY ARE IN ALUS'S ROOM! well alus... going to try and get a home run are ya?
| The Trailblazer 5/14/12 . chapter 2
Wah, Arc! You're so brave, confessing your feelings with a kiss! And Alus is pretty brave too for kissing Jesen who's also brave for telling Alus his feelings. Oh my, the drama! And who does Alus really like? I can't wait to find out! I allso wanna know what Jesen's up to and what's gonna happen to Evangeline's brother? I hope the find him and that he's okay!
Okay, enough of my drabbling, so what did I think of the chapter, that's the important thing here! I thought it was great! And as you can see I'm eager to find out what's gonna happen. So that exam of yours is making me sad, ruining all the fun reading for me ;_; I have to admit I like all this complicated drama, I feel sorry for them of course, cause it's not easy stuggling with confused feelings but I just love reading!
Anyway, good luck on your exam and I'm looking forward to future updates from you ;D
| demonwindy 5/14/12 . chapter 2
wow you have them kissing already. :3 YAY ARC AND ALUS! sorry Jesen i do like you...but i like arc better. :3
so alus WAS the reason he couldn't sleep at night. hehehe.
WOW HE KNEW ABOUT JESEN! ;3 smart cookie you are alus. :3
i wonder why alus... Most places with huge army's that are well known are know to want more power. good thing arc came.
Lol alus has eyes in the back of his head. :3 hehehe.
ALUS! YOU'ER KISSING SOMEONE ELSE! NOO!
wow Arc your eavesdropping aren't you. now there's going to be a love triangle. oh well that's what will make it fun.
...i have a feeling Jesen might plan something.
SO FAR IT'S AWESOME! can't wait for round 3! er... chapter 3. hehehe.
| demonwindy 4/21/12 . chapter 1
Wow! IT"S SO AMAZING! the best i've read! I can't wait for the next chapter!