|Reviews for The Untouchable|
| moniqe 12/26/12 . chapter 10
I lovvvvve your story it's great
| ultimate beach lover 11/12/12 . chapter 10
I really love this story! The concept is cool and it's so cute how much alek cares about Chloe! Don't get caught up in all the hate because you are too awesome for it! Please update soon!
| kaitlyn99 11/7/12 . chapter 10
freaking loved it!
| iWant9Lives2Live 11/6/12 . chapter 10
YAY I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR DATE… PLEASE UPDATE ASAP XD
| SyfyGeek13 11/6/12 . chapter 10
I can't wait for their date! Hope you update soon (:
| ilwtnlock 10/30/12 . chapter 9
That was a really mean message nobodys perfect and if someone has a problem with that the they can just stop reading this awesome story, don't let one person ruin your day or story. Fanfiction is about writing wonderful stories and having fun. If you ask me I really enjoy reading this story, so keep writing and tell the haters to jump of a building. ;) hope you write more
| Mrs. Josh Hutcherson 10/22/12 . chapter 9
| nickie18love 10/6/12 . chapter 9
I love your story. Who ever posted that review is a vendictive ass hole and should go get a life and if they think they are so much better at writing they should write their own stories instead of hating on someone else's who obviously took time and effort to produce something for others to enjoy.
I hope you continue this story, i have really enjoyed it thus far and look forward to seeing how this turns out.
| bella rose 9/25/12 . chapter 9
ignore stupid ppl your story is cute an has real potential i love it plz fiish it for me or email me the full story i love it
| Guest 9/20/12 . chapter 9
| Guest 9/18/12 . chapter 9
what a jerk i absolutly love it. they person has no right. i hope you keep writting i think its awsome and so what if you make mistakes in writing everyone does. ugh i hate people like that. that person if you can call them a person is defintly wrong. and i loved it from the beginning and stil do.
| Guest 9/1/12 . chapter 9
Your story is amazing dOnt listen to that message btw it's britishbombshell
| Yodtukw 9/1/12 . chapter 9
Keep writing, the story is awesome.
| TheLambAndTheLion 9/1/12 . chapter 9
I couldn't agree more with panaricanchick, keep writing not just because you have lots of fans but because you like it. Accept constructive criticism but not that bullshit, never mind with this kind of people, they don't deserve your time. ;)
| Dancer4Life2001 9/1/12 . chapter 9
i think that this is a good story. it doesnt matter what everyone else thinks... this is for your enjoyment and creativity... i mean, this is for you to get your ideas out. i think that this story should get a chance