Well well well...for one - its the weekend and no new chapter on HR - better be worth the wait! lol. i skipped over Faeral and went to this instead, good read. I like the fabricated charges and the way it all progresses to end with a YAY moment :) short, sweet, and SEXY hahaha. you should write an alt ending to this for the hell of it, what would happen if Bo had no choice BUT to go all Queen Succubus on everyone? I like that idea...triple thumbs up :)

Thoroughly enjoyed this. It's a great story. Any chance of a sequel? :P

That was wonderful. :) What a well thought out story, and of course a beautiful portrayal of Bo's feelings for Lauren. The witch subplot and hints of Bo-gone-bad were also excellent additions that really sold this fic. Thank you for sharing!

Great story. I love the witch Kenzi idea!

Very well written- I loved this story!

love the story and would love to see a 2 part to it..

this is one of the best story I have ever read and I love it :) I hope u will writte more storys like this amazing story :)

I've read 2 of your fics so far, although they center around Bo and Lauren, they in fact have minimal interaction. Hopefully the rest of ur fics aren't like that. Thx

Cool story. I like that you brought back the stag story line that was cool. I wish the interaction between Lauren and Bo had a bit more spark though, more passion. It was always so thick on the show, all the unspoken subtext between the two of them. I really enjoyed all the parts with Kenzi she is my favorite character on the show and you portrayed her really well. Over all good job and I will be reading more of work. Can't wait to see where your next story will take me. n_n

Brill story, would love to read more :)

I love this soooo much! Thank you for writing . I will be so very content if season three begins this way...

Tis was a ice diversion. I enjoyed the revelations of love and a clever use of Kenzi's fate from the Norn visit. Loved Bo battling to keep the inner deon reigned in with all the stress and pressure. Glad Val didn't make the sucker move. Love the way everyone came through for Lauren. Thanks for the ride and I look forward to reading more from you two...hint, hint, hint ;).

ok I did read this yesterday, but was out all day and my phone wouldn't let me post a review! *glares at it* I was studying, but couldn't resist hitting the refresh button every 15min to see if you guys had updated this story. I LOVED it! You have the characters written so well from how they speak to how they act to what they would do in specific situations. I'll definitely be rereading this one a lot. I seriously can't wait for your next fic :D Keep 'em coming!

This was amazing! I really enjoyed it! Please do a sequel to it?

OMG you guys! I was only like half (3/4) serious! You guys! You write LG like my heart wants to see it AND you grant wishes too? You're like magical writer/genie people. Or maybe, one of you writes, while the other works the magic lamp mojo...hmmm. Anyway, gosh, 3 chapters when I got home aka the rest of the story! Loved the hunt so much, almost wish it had been longer. You lost me for a few minutes as I daydreamed Lauren in camo gear. All kinds of adorable. As was the image of her as a fox. The Bo underwear trail made me LOL so hard, Kenzie would SO do something like that. Characterization is amazing, as are the 'voices'. That can really make or break a story, but you guys have it. Also, no hard feelings for the arrow sticking out of my favorite. Afterwards you gave her painkillers, and a sling, and Bo's chest, and some kissing and stuff...so we're quits on that one. I'm sad this one's over. It could do with a sequel. You've created quite a fascinating beginning here, with loads of unexplored goodies. Either way, sequel or brand new stories, I'm sure they'll be awesome. Can't wait:)