It's interesting so far! I'm looking forward to seeing all the cast return. :) That's all I have to say for now, please continue.

This is really interesting so far, and I have to say that I haven't seen anything like it before. I'm can't wait to see how this turns out!

I suspected that the girl was Colette, but I wonder how she got into that situation. I guess we'll see! I'm also curious about how Lloyd ended up a noble there.

Anyway, keep writing and I hope to see more soon!

Not bad at all... actually, it's pretty good! Is it your first fanfiction?