Reviews for At The Beginning
jackiemack916 6/6/13 . chapter 1
Love, love, love this story.
startraveller776 6/5/13 . chapter 4
Exiled Aesir - seems like a dangerous thing.
startraveller776 6/5/13 . chapter 3
Oh, Fandral.
startraveller776 6/5/13 . chapter 2
Fantastic. I'm totally hooked. (I'm a sucker for really good AU's.)

I wasn't sure about your not!broken Loki in this, but I'm totally down. I imagine, however, that he doesn't know he's a Frost Giant, and seeing how they are involved in this war... I'm just spitballing here. Don't mind me.
startraveller776 6/4/13 . chapter 1
This is a very interesting premise.
MadHatter96 5/27/13 . chapter 33
AAAAAAAH THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD! Everything was written perfectly, the reactions, the thoughts, the everything. *fangirls into sunset*
Sindar 5/4/13 . chapter 34
This story was amazing. I greatly enjoyed it.
Widow Shark 10/29/12 . chapter 34
Wonderful story! Never a dull moment. It was mysterious and funny and heartbreaking all at once. Jane developing magic was a great twist. And I loved the romance between her and Loki; it was sexy, but not explicit. Thank you for a wonderful read. :)
Guest 10/5/12 . chapter 10
What the hell is a bilshtipe? Tried Googling it but nothing came...
Prime Deception 9/23/12 . chapter 34
I would have reviewed every single chapter to this story, but I've literally been reading this for almost two days straight and I literally only stopped to eat. I even fell asleep reading it. I actually woke up with my iPod on my face this morning. Words cannot describe how beautiful of a story this is, and honestly, it's the best I've ever read out of all of the Thor fics that I've read. It had so much intricacy without getting confusing, and it was also downright adorable. Wow, this is the most serious I've ever sounded in a review, haha. But really, such a good story. I found the one shot for this fic and then read that there was a full story with it and was like SCORE! And plus is was already done by the time I started reading it, which is a plus since my other favorites have like a two month update rate -_- Anyways... I hope you're proud of this story, because it just made my life a whole lot awesomer, and I'm actually finding myself wishing that this had really happened in the movie! Well done! :D
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun 9/22/12 . chapter 35
oooh! I may just read it!
Guest 8/17/12 . chapter 10
Great story! Loving it.
CYLi 8/14/12 . chapter 12
ahh Lokane forever! love this.
MarvelSparrow16 7/20/12 . chapter 23
Crying my eyes out at 2.30 am in my bedroom... WHY?

No really, extremly well written. This story is one of only 2 that has ever made me cry. It is near unbelievable how much of a connection you make between the reader and the charecters. You are amazing.

BUT WHY DID YOU KILL THOR?
Guest 7/19/12 . chapter 34
I think this is probably my favorite Jane/Loki story. Brilliant. :)
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