*sighs* So, so beautiful.

I could totally see this happening. For both of them. Such a complex situation they put themselves in.

You did a wonderful job with their angst. Not overdone, just right.

Thanks for sharing.

Maia.

Okay. Not *SO* much of a bitch. :(

SNIFFLE! The ending was so... And all of it was so...

POOR ALEC! :( I LURVE HIM SO! Damn. Max is such a BITCH in this one! :P

Thats just wrong she should have told him. It was a really good story.

read this one

Hey,

This was beautiful; it was well written and filled with emotion and I loved it.

Bye, smile :-)

beautiful..

Wow. Beautiful, just beautiful. I love how insightful and cleverly poignant you are. This was incredible, and I'm overjoyed that you didn't leave it as a one-shot.

Poetic, eloquent. Perfect in every way. You're doing wonders with this series, and I love how you always seem to get inside the characters' heads. Nobody could do this better than you.

Ugh, gotta read some light stuff for a change. It's all so depressing... But also great at the same time ;-)

WOW! That was some really impressive writing. A lot of the stuff I read is totally mediocre and unoriginal, but this... WOW! Despite it's short length, the strong writing really pulled me in and had me hooked. That's the real deal, right there.

Oh no you don't, c'mon don't end it, give us a happy ending! You have a great story going here!

Love it! Kim

This is so sad. I just want to hug Alec and love him. Why does Max suck so much? Nice job.

That was so sad, but I loved it.

That was so sad. Please cheer me up and write some more.