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| Reviews for The Mysteries and Magic of the Moon Pool |
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   Ditzy-Dreamer 3/5/13 . chapter 6Please continue this story! It's great so far and I love it :) |
| Ditzy-Dreamer 2/21/13 . chapter 4 I love this story! Please continue it! :) |
| Guest 2/19/13 . chapter 6 Continue this story it's awnazung don't give up |
| Marril96 2/19/13 . chapter 6 If you're not happy with your story, then just start anew. Here's a suggestion: if you're writing a new story, write the first ten chapters or so first before posting. That'll give you enough time to write more and keep updating since you won't be stuck with block. I wish you the best of luck! |
| SerenSplash989 12/23/12 . chapter 5 I freaking LOVVVVVVVED it! haha, had nice humurous parts to it, and I pretty much loved it overall! Continue to work on this, because I'm not a patient person. O.O Haha, jk... no... really though. I'm not patient. ... Welllll, anyways, this as amazing and I'm so glad you are better at upadating than I am! -.- Haha, so work on this girl, and continue being that awesome girl I know you are! 3 |
| charlotte bird 11/25/12 . chapter 1 this is not h2o just add water |
| Guest 11/15/12 . chapter 5 WOW MY FAV STORY SO FAR ive read soo many stories o FF but this tops them all please keep updateing regularly and CANT WAIT for the next chapter :-) |
| Cara H 11/15/12 . chapter 1 loved the legs no tail thing! |
| Marril96 11/14/12 . chapter 5 Olivia freezing her brother was hilarious. This chapter was crazy (in the good way). I love the full moon chapters, though I wanted to see Kyle and Olivia apologizing to Madison, but oh well. They're ARE friends so maybe they're instantly forgiven. Looking forward to more awesomeness! |
| that one turtle guy 10/25/12 . chapter 4 where are the turtles? |
| that one turtle guy 10/25/12 . chapter 3 can u put turtles in it |
| that one turtle guy 10/25/12 . chapter 2 i like it |
| that one turtle guy 10/25/12 . chapter 1 its good |
| SerenSplash989 10/20/12 . chapter 4 Omg i love love loved this chapter! It was a nice surprise when Mrs. Ashwood was a mermaid ;) hehe! and I'm sort of low on ideas at the moment too but if i do get one, ill let you know! :) |
| Marril96 10/20/12 . chapter 4 I loved this chapter. The Science teacher seems nice and I believe her intentions are genuine. I hope she won't turn out like Denman and Silvana, though. I love flashback chapters and this one is amazing! Hmmm, ideas... maybe Ms. Ashwood wants to be a mermaid again so she plans something wicked for the girls and pretends to be their friend. Or we find out the true reason Ms. Ashwood lost her powers. Maybe she was evil and her friends pushed her into the Moon pool so she'd lose her powers and therefore won't be able to hurt anyone anymore. |
