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  Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 6 Continue |
 emmawalters090 5/6/13 . chapter 2poor kataro :( |
| emmawalters090 5/6/13 . chapter 1 god i love this story i hope there will be 50 chapters coming right :) |
| Puppytime the Otaku 2/9/13 . chapter 6 Update |
| Aliciaally 12/26/12 . chapter 6 Hello I'm wat come on make onther one for me please |
| Yonna 12/26/12 . chapter 6 Wat happens next! |
| johanna 12/20/12 . chapter 2 hey can you pleae correct it's kotaro and not kataro |
| 3BFFs 12/17/12 . chapter 6 Poor Jiro, that was my reaction to Twilight well except I was forced to watch the entire thing. Anyway great job and he's right, children and babies do laugh at another person's misery! |
| 3BFFs 12/16/12 . chapter 5 This is amazing! Please continue it! I'd love to see Jiro's reaction to being told he's going to be a daddy! |
| Animefan151 8/5/12 . chapter 5 This is getting really good please update |
| Weeeeeee 8/4/12 . chapter 5 This is great please update soon |
| MaxInu23 6/1/12 . chapter 5 Okay, I'm sure this would be a good story, but I can't read it. When your typing dialogue, when the speaker changes, start a new paragraph. Like this: "Mom, what's for dinner?" I yelled down the hall. "Tacos!" My mom yelled back. |
